for Rest in Peace9/28/2007 c1 
5Eagle Seance
Liked the repetition. Unconventional use of grammar, but it didn't really effect the tone of the poem, which was good.
5Eagle SeanceLiked the repetition. Unconventional use of grammar, but it didn't really effect the tone of the poem, which was good.
9/28/2007 c1 70EyesEmphatic
So sad. I love it though, loved the ending. Also loved the description of her smile, you can picture it.
70EyesEmphaticSo sad. I love it though, loved the ending. Also loved the description of her smile, you can picture it.