for Eulogy For A Loved Man12/25/2008 c1 
9Chiharu Yuizaki
this story is poetic it makes me want to cry! i loved reading every single word! gosh if only i could write like you, that would be so awesome... i'm sorry you had to deal with something so tragic like that but you know, as cliche as it may sound, its true that what doesnt kill us only makes us strogner and i like to believe that even though we cant actually see or touch them anymore, they're never really gone. as long as we dont forget, you know, they'll always be there... umm... sorry if that was too personal for you but anyway, great story (eulogy autobiography?) contniue your writing, its a great addition to the stories here
9Chiharu Yuizakithis story is poetic it makes me want to cry! i loved reading every single word! gosh if only i could write like you, that would be so awesome... i'm sorry you had to deal with something so tragic like that but you know, as cliche as it may sound, its true that what doesnt kill us only makes us strogner and i like to believe that even though we cant actually see or touch them anymore, they're never really gone. as long as we dont forget, you know, they'll always be there... umm... sorry if that was too personal for you but anyway, great story (eulogy autobiography?) contniue your writing, its a great addition to the stories here
10/2/2007 c1 1Crazy Dude II
This really touched me. (I can relate to it) You wrote it beautifully and expressed it in an amazing way. I loved this and I'm having a hard time trying to tell you my reaction. That just shows how good this is...
1Crazy Dude IIThis really touched me. (I can relate to it) You wrote it beautifully and expressed it in an amazing way. I loved this and I'm having a hard time trying to tell you my reaction. That just shows how good this is...
10/2/2007 c1 25cat-tif
So beautiful. Is this real? It feels very real. I hope for you that it's not. If it is, I'm sorry.
25cat-tifSo beautiful. Is this real? It feels very real. I hope for you that it's not. If it is, I'm sorry.
10/1/2007 c1 92burning in effigy
this is so fricking sad and sweet.
and i like how you've written this in first person. if it were in third person, it would seem so much more detached.
like the simplicity and the anecdotes and i like how you delve deeper near the end
excellent job
92burning in effigythis is so fricking sad and sweet.
and i like how you've written this in first person. if it were in third person, it would seem so much more detached.
like the simplicity and the anecdotes and i like how you delve deeper near the end
excellent job