for a little like jesus10/17/2007 c1 
25TylerB
Very interesting to say the least. It was amusing and it kept my attention (which is more than I can say for alot of the fodder on this site)
It peaked my interest for sure. Didn't know what to expect when I started reading it, and ended up a little confused before it was all said and done. Still very interesting.
25TylerBVery interesting to say the least. It was amusing and it kept my attention (which is more than I can say for alot of the fodder on this site)
It peaked my interest for sure. Didn't know what to expect when I started reading it, and ended up a little confused before it was all said and done. Still very interesting.
10/2/2007 c1 29diffident
I really liked this until the last stanza. I don't know, it just doesn't fit. I think it ends perfectly with the first stanza, seriously. I know the second stanza has a specific purpose that the poem needs, but it seems so out of place. The rest of the poem is just fucking amazing. Amazing.
marie
29diffidentI really liked this until the last stanza. I don't know, it just doesn't fit. I think it ends perfectly with the first stanza, seriously. I know the second stanza has a specific purpose that the poem needs, but it seems so out of place. The rest of the poem is just fucking amazing. Amazing.
marie
10/2/2007 c1 69this is britt
the best poems are the kind that you just read and wish "jesus (bad pun) i wish i had written that" and this is one of those poems. this is beautiful. just the right amount of real emotion and sort of standing-on-toes dark humor to make it work- "the Babylonian whore slunk forth" (what a great phrase, beautiful precise wording) all in all an amazing piece.
69this is brittthe best poems are the kind that you just read and wish "jesus (bad pun) i wish i had written that" and this is one of those poems. this is beautiful. just the right amount of real emotion and sort of standing-on-toes dark humor to make it work- "the Babylonian whore slunk forth" (what a great phrase, beautiful precise wording) all in all an amazing piece.