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10/17/2007 c1 25TylerB
Very interesting to say the least. It was amusing and it kept my attention (which is more than I can say for alot of the fodder on this site)

It peaked my interest for sure. Didn't know what to expect when I started reading it, and ended up a little confused before it was all said and done. Still very interesting.
10/2/2007 c1 29diffident
I really liked this until the last stanza. I don't know, it just doesn't fit. I think it ends perfectly with the first stanza, seriously. I know the second stanza has a specific purpose that the poem needs, but it seems so out of place. The rest of the poem is just fucking amazing. Amazing.

10/2/2007 c1 emiray
Quite cute. I liked it. :)
10/2/2007 c1 69this is britt
the best poems are the kind that you just read and wish "jesus (bad pun) i wish i had written that" and this is one of those poems. this is beautiful. just the right amount of real emotion and sort of standing-on-toes dark humor to make it work- "the Babylonian whore slunk forth" (what a great phrase, beautiful precise wording) all in all an amazing piece.

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