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10/24/2007 c1 5delicate-death
That play was so good! I thought it was a great scene! I hope to read more soon. Keep up the good work.
10/9/2007 c1 9LaughingFreak
This was hilarious! I loved it! Great job.
10/7/2007 c1 62Oracle of Destiny
LMAO! Thanks for making me giggle like mad hehe :) I really enjoyed it!

By the way I added this onto my Favourite Stories ;-)
10/6/2007 c1 6The Abstract Dualist
Heh. Okay... little disturbing.

But not bad.

Hell, it's a short one-act. What do you want me to say?
10/4/2007 c1 Fei
It made me laugh. I don't think I'd be quite as accepting of my boyfriend inviting another guy/my best friend asking me to nail his girlfriend as Rich haha, but I found the script very believable. I found one little mistake...

JUSTIN

No! I told you, Emily and I want you to share this experience with us. I mean, we've all been friends for years. And besides, I've seen already seen you naked

you wrote seen, then already, then seen again. should just be already seen.

Very nice
10/3/2007 c1 18Tikklz
This scene is really funny. It would be a great BEGINNING to a play. It really pulls you in, but you should take the story further. I don't even mean the sex scene. Just the character's stories. I really like when something unusual happening is the starting point. But do with it what you will. It is yours.

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