for Speaking Terms4/11/2008 c1 misery sister
In all the stories I've ever read, books and online, this is the first time I've read the word 'bijective'. Hahahah!
This is a good story, but sometimes, I'd lose myself in the paragraphs. It's advisable to space out your paragraphs a bit, to avoid big blocks of text. They intimidate readers, and unless it's a fast paced action scene with short, staccato sentences keeping the reader's attention, it's best to avoid them.
Good story though.
In all the stories I've ever read, books and online, this is the first time I've read the word 'bijective'. Hahahah!
This is a good story, but sometimes, I'd lose myself in the paragraphs. It's advisable to space out your paragraphs a bit, to avoid big blocks of text. They intimidate readers, and unless it's a fast paced action scene with short, staccato sentences keeping the reader's attention, it's best to avoid them.
Good story though.
11/12/2007 c3 toni
at least ONE person is reading! i love your story- great characters, i'm already attached... keep writing!
at least ONE person is reading! i love your story- great characters, i'm already attached... keep writing!
10/3/2007 c1 
8lil.miss.sammi
OK, so is the following statements correct lol
fiona likes caden
caden is dating roisin
roisin likes horatio (or is attracted to him)
horatio seems to like august (is he gay?)
and august seems to have a thing for the teacher
...
is that right lol?
anyways
keep writing
update soon
ur a real good writer
8lil.miss.sammiOK, so is the following statements correct lol
fiona likes caden
caden is dating roisin
roisin likes horatio (or is attracted to him)
horatio seems to like august (is he gay?)
and august seems to have a thing for the teacher
...
is that right lol?
anyways
keep writing
update soon
ur a real good writer