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5/20/2008 c1 46stained blue
lat stanza is the best,

you 'paste' your words together so well.
11/17/2007 c1 97rust phoenix
I love the title. Your wording is very creative, and does a great job setting the mood. The last stanza is my favorite, but the whole thing is quite stylish and beautiful.
10/7/2007 c1 15Countess of the Spires
Long live octoberunderground!

I heart this poem! The comparison of pumpkins to lovers, of winter's icy kiss to shredded cardiac fibers, of knives to enraptured obssession.

Amazing!

. . . And yes, please feel free to kick and/or pwn Poe. Anytime.
10/6/2007 c1 322Basara
a dissapointment on love...

nice...
10/5/2007 c1 92burning in effigy
effing brilliant- love this love this love this; the overall idea and the way you piece this together puts me in bliss (haha)

:)
10/5/2007 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
This makes me remember what it is about fall that I love so much - the whole warmth of loneliness, if that makes sense. (Of course it doesn't; I never make sense.) The title is pure gorgeous, and if this poem had a color, it would be orange, for sure. This is beautiful, as always. Keep writing! :)
10/4/2007 c1 she smolders
A very thought-provoking if morbid analogy to a jack-o'-lantern. I like it, especially the last verse. Take care.

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