for Because of a Boy7/9/2008 c1 
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iknowhowyoufeel...
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comparedtoyours...
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iknowhowyoufeel...
wow...
mywritingsucks...
comparedtoyours...
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11/22/2007 c22 14Halani
Did you just hear my jaw hit the floor? I think I did.
I was a smidge unhappy that she married Bryce, but I think I get why you did it.
But at least she WAS with Byron for a little while. And is now pregnant with his child. But tis depressing because that will always be her little reminder.
Congrats on the finished story and I can't wait for the new story. Sounds good!
-Halani
14HalaniDid you just hear my jaw hit the floor? I think I did.
I was a smidge unhappy that she married Bryce, but I think I get why you did it.
But at least she WAS with Byron for a little while. And is now pregnant with his child. But tis depressing because that will always be her little reminder.
Congrats on the finished story and I can't wait for the new story. Sounds good!
-Halani
11/22/2007 c22 2Sarah-Ray
I don't like Bryce but after all I have to say its a 'perfect' ending..
Congratulations
can't wait for you to post the new story :D
2Sarah-RayI don't like Bryce but after all I have to say its a 'perfect' ending..
Congratulations
can't wait for you to post the new story :D
11/22/2007 c21 Sarah-Ray
LOL that was fun to read
I feel pity for Jan
but yeah can't wait for the next one
and oh yea, you're welcome! :D
LOL that was fun to read
I feel pity for Jan
but yeah can't wait for the next one
and oh yea, you're welcome! :D
11/22/2007 c21 1Alexa'sAppleTree
What an evil twin sister :(! And Jamie... I feel so sorry for her ;_;... Who will ever love her in a real way? and not cheat on her :o! I wonder what's going to happen . Please update soon :) !
1Alexa'sAppleTreeWhat an evil twin sister :(! And Jamie... I feel so sorry for her ;_;... Who will ever love her in a real way? and not cheat on her :o! I wonder what's going to happen . Please update soon :) !
11/22/2007 c19 Sarah-Ray
David =@
Omg I'm so mad at him how can he leave such a sweet girl like her?
and I also like that Byron guy he seems nice and way much better than the dumbass David
David =@
Omg I'm so mad at him how can he leave such a sweet girl like her?
and I also like that Byron guy he seems nice and way much better than the dumbass David
11/21/2007 c20 14Halani
No Jan, you DONT need to talk. You need to leave the house and never talk to Jamie again.
THREE CHAPTERS IN ONE NIGHT! I can hear the hallelujah angel chorus singing! I don't think I could have LIVED without those three chapters!
Anyway... Gotta know why Jan needs to talk.
Update soonish. Or whenever you feel like it.
-Halani
14HalaniNo Jan, you DONT need to talk. You need to leave the house and never talk to Jamie again.
THREE CHAPTERS IN ONE NIGHT! I can hear the hallelujah angel chorus singing! I don't think I could have LIVED without those three chapters!
Anyway... Gotta know why Jan needs to talk.
Update soonish. Or whenever you feel like it.
-Halani
11/21/2007 c19 Halani
Well my last remark was unneeded.
YOU KNOW WHAT? David deserves to have wheat cereal thrown at his head and his girlfriends head! But I guess he isn't gay. So that thought is out the window.
Guys shouldn't do that to a girl! Playing with their heart is just so wrong! I mean you think that they know that the guy just wants like a summer fling but then the girl starts falling for him because she doesn't know that. But the guy thinks she knows and so then he thinks she'll understand the breakup! If that made any sense at all.
You know what? Darn David. He doesn't deserve Jamie anyway. He deserves a vicious hearted person with a vicious heart!
If Byron turns on Jamie... There's no hope in the world.
I guess my last little comment was unneeded as said before so yeah just ignore that and add it to this:
*~Update~* ^Soon^
Heh I decorated it!
-Halani
Well my last remark was unneeded.
YOU KNOW WHAT? David deserves to have wheat cereal thrown at his head and his girlfriends head! But I guess he isn't gay. So that thought is out the window.
Guys shouldn't do that to a girl! Playing with their heart is just so wrong! I mean you think that they know that the guy just wants like a summer fling but then the girl starts falling for him because she doesn't know that. But the guy thinks she knows and so then he thinks she'll understand the breakup! If that made any sense at all.
You know what? Darn David. He doesn't deserve Jamie anyway. He deserves a vicious hearted person with a vicious heart!
If Byron turns on Jamie... There's no hope in the world.
I guess my last little comment was unneeded as said before so yeah just ignore that and add it to this:
*~Update~* ^Soon^
Heh I decorated it!
-Halani
11/21/2007 c18 Halani
And now she shall catch him with his girlfriend. Darn David and his stupid girlfriend. Or boyfriend. He could be gay. Ya never know. Wait no he couldn't be because he dated Jamie... You know what, I need to shut up and not think out loud.
Then there's this Byron kid. I like the "Bad Boys"! =D Lol. He seems decent enough. . .
Um I don't think I have anything else to say... So yeah, fantabulous update but now I'm scared. I like David... *sniffle* Why do all the so-called "Good Guys" have to cheat on their girlfriends!
Update soon!
-Halani
And now she shall catch him with his girlfriend. Darn David and his stupid girlfriend. Or boyfriend. He could be gay. Ya never know. Wait no he couldn't be because he dated Jamie... You know what, I need to shut up and not think out loud.
Then there's this Byron kid. I like the "Bad Boys"! =D Lol. He seems decent enough. . .
Um I don't think I have anything else to say... So yeah, fantabulous update but now I'm scared. I like David... *sniffle* Why do all the so-called "Good Guys" have to cheat on their girlfriends!
Update soon!
-Halani
11/19/2007 c17 14Halani
YOU KNOW WHAT? Jeez, I won't take out my anger on you. I swear. I'll take it out on David! I'm going to jump into this computer and knock some FREAKIN' sense into this guys brain!
Jamie must feel horrible because she can't get a good guy. Both boyfriends cheated on her and Bryce tried to rape her.
If I was her I'd swear off guys for good.
Now onto the positive: Maybe Bryce isn't telling the truth. Maybe not, maybe so, you never know. HAH IM A POET! =D
Anyway, it was a depressing chapter! I guess I'll keep my wheat cereal in real life until something horribly bad happens.
-Halani
14HalaniYOU KNOW WHAT? Jeez, I won't take out my anger on you. I swear. I'll take it out on David! I'm going to jump into this computer and knock some FREAKIN' sense into this guys brain!
Jamie must feel horrible because she can't get a good guy. Both boyfriends cheated on her and Bryce tried to rape her.
If I was her I'd swear off guys for good.
Now onto the positive: Maybe Bryce isn't telling the truth. Maybe not, maybe so, you never know. HAH IM A POET! =D
Anyway, it was a depressing chapter! I guess I'll keep my wheat cereal in real life until something horribly bad happens.
-Halani
11/19/2007 c17 1PINKGAZER1990
omg omg omg omg please please please hurry up with the next one! i cannot believe that omgg HURY! I CANT WAIT NE LONGER! AMAZING!
1PINKGAZER1990omg omg omg omg please please please hurry up with the next one! i cannot believe that omgg HURY! I CANT WAIT NE LONGER! AMAZING!