for On the Line11/9/2009 c3 Justin Vone
hmm i like this story.
hmm i like this story.
7/14/2009 c3 Asha
Nice chapter:-) Hope there will be more Ridge x Deacon moments next time^_^
Nice chapter:-) Hope there will be more Ridge x Deacon moments next time^_^
6/17/2009 c2 Asha
I like the idea of this story. I hope you will continue sometimes...
I like the idea of this story. I hope you will continue sometimes...
3/9/2009 c2 Jusmine
"He likes me, however, and has *since* gotten over my habit of stealing his coffee on mornings when I’m less-than-enthused about the day."
I think that you need to lose the "since" there, because there is no specification of time from before... Or something like that. That sounded much more coherent in my head.
Anyway... Hope you continue this story some day. ^_^
"He likes me, however, and has *since* gotten over my habit of stealing his coffee on mornings when I’m less-than-enthused about the day."
I think that you need to lose the "since" there, because there is no specification of time from before... Or something like that. That sounded much more coherent in my head.
Anyway... Hope you continue this story some day. ^_^
3/9/2009 c1 Jusmine
“You have a brother,” Deacon told me, attempting to sidestep me and keep walking. / “Really?” I asked, “I never knew that. And all these years I thought I was an only child…”
Yes! I /love/ sarcasm! ^_^
"When Deacon put his *cark* in park and turned off the ignition, I practically jumped out of the car, leaving my draw-string bag on the floor in the front seat."
What the hell is a "cark"? lol.
Don't you just love "straight" guys who love making out with other guys? I know I do! Makes for more drama that way. lol. :D
“You have a brother,” Deacon told me, attempting to sidestep me and keep walking. / “Really?” I asked, “I never knew that. And all these years I thought I was an only child…”
Yes! I /love/ sarcasm! ^_^
"When Deacon put his *cark* in park and turned off the ignition, I practically jumped out of the car, leaving my draw-string bag on the floor in the front seat."
What the hell is a "cark"? lol.
Don't you just love "straight" guys who love making out with other guys? I know I do! Makes for more drama that way. lol. :D
2/11/2009 c2 
1ValuedOpinion
Hey. I really like this story so far, you've created an interesting story line and well rounded characters, along with great potential for a shit load of drama. Overall, a GREAT story in the making. :D I understand that it's been over 7 months since you updated, but I was wondering if you planned to continue this story. I would really like to finish reading it if you're willing to finish writing it. I can't wait to read what happens next :)
ps. please...? :D :D
1ValuedOpinionHey. I really like this story so far, you've created an interesting story line and well rounded characters, along with great potential for a shit load of drama. Overall, a GREAT story in the making. :D I understand that it's been over 7 months since you updated, but I was wondering if you planned to continue this story. I would really like to finish reading it if you're willing to finish writing it. I can't wait to read what happens next :)
ps. please...? :D :D
2/10/2009 c1 71Subbie
OK. So I reread it. Big deal. Anyways, it wouldn't let me review on the other chappie 'cause I've already done that, but now my opinion has changed... let them be together! They're so cute!
Lee
71SubbieOK. So I reread it. Big deal. Anyways, it wouldn't let me review on the other chappie 'cause I've already done that, but now my opinion has changed... let them be together! They're so cute!
Lee
7/31/2008 c2 Subbie
Why is he wasting his time on this dickhead? Deacon is totally screwing him over. Not literally, but come on, this guy is such a player!
Sorry for my little rant there.
Great Job so far, can't wait for more!
:K
Bloodfeeder
Why is he wasting his time on this dickhead? Deacon is totally screwing him over. Not literally, but come on, this guy is such a player!
Sorry for my little rant there.
Great Job so far, can't wait for more!
:K
Bloodfeeder
4/2/2008 c1 1SiD EliA
I'm so confused Yet intrested I-I... I just want to hug you.
Grr hugs of confusion. I can't wait til the next chapter.
1SiD EliAI'm so confused Yet intrested I-I... I just want to hug you.
Grr hugs of confusion. I can't wait til the next chapter.
2/9/2008 c1 10QueenCasey
So...wow. I really like this. Especially how it kind of starts in the middle of the action. I would love it if you continued this but would understand if you don't.
10QueenCaseySo...wow. I really like this. Especially how it kind of starts in the middle of the action. I would love it if you continued this but would understand if you don't.
1/10/2008 c1 Orangeena
I hope you're planning to continue with this. It's very intriguing and a good start. I'd like to know more about the background of their relationship. How did it begin? What made Deacon, as resistant as he is, get involved with Ridge? I can make a guess as to who made the first move.. but I could be wrong!
I'd love more! The sooner, the better ;D
I hope you're planning to continue with this. It's very intriguing and a good start. I'd like to know more about the background of their relationship. How did it begin? What made Deacon, as resistant as he is, get involved with Ridge? I can make a guess as to who made the first move.. but I could be wrong!
I'd love more! The sooner, the better ;D