
10/11/2007 c1
19Core Satiated
You absolutely surprised me at the end with this. I totally loved the surprise. I thought metaphorically the whole time I read, and when you revealed the gravestone at the end, it was like I should've seen it coming. That's what separates the forgettable poems and stories and just pure emotional talent. I will never forget that I read this.

You absolutely surprised me at the end with this. I totally loved the surprise. I thought metaphorically the whole time I read, and when you revealed the gravestone at the end, it was like I should've seen it coming. That's what separates the forgettable poems and stories and just pure emotional talent. I will never forget that I read this.