for Forever12/3/2008 c1 
3WalkingUnnoticed
that was so cute!
You conveyed as much in under 400 words as some people do in 10. I loved it
3WalkingUnnoticedthat was so cute!
You conveyed as much in under 400 words as some people do in 10. I loved it
10/22/2007 c1 11ThePiracyOfHearts
this is good! i like the way we're cought off gaurd at the very beginning. it sent my heart racing!
xof
11ThePiracyOfHeartsthis is good! i like the way we're cought off gaurd at the very beginning. it sent my heart racing!
xof
10/6/2007 c1 9Lily Llynn
Aw this is cute. (: Short and sweet, as they say. I think I might've liked it better if it was longer, but I still really like it. (: I'm so glad someone added it to our c2! (:
9Lily LlynnAw this is cute. (: Short and sweet, as they say. I think I might've liked it better if it was longer, but I still really like it. (: I'm so glad someone added it to our c2! (:
10/6/2007 c1 4Bitten by a cow
Hmm...I think it's kind of short, but that's okay. It could have a little more description at the beginning, but you don't need it. Err, tonguing? That's a little much for a first kiss. But other than that, I like it! You kinda made the few words you had work together and make it pretty. It could use some work, but it's pretty good other than a few scratches here and there! Good show! (applause)(or applesauce, whichever you prefer)
Bitten
Smile! :) God loves you!
4Bitten by a cowHmm...I think it's kind of short, but that's okay. It could have a little more description at the beginning, but you don't need it. Err, tonguing? That's a little much for a first kiss. But other than that, I like it! You kinda made the few words you had work together and make it pretty. It could use some work, but it's pretty good other than a few scratches here and there! Good show! (applause)(or applesauce, whichever you prefer)
Bitten
Smile! :) God loves you!