for Out of Bounds9/9/2008 c21 A Scarred Soul
OMGKG! haha That was funny! I love her reaction - that is, no reaction at all. lol And the scene before them while Mike was explaining why he wasn't who the school thought he was was really sweet. I feel even worse that he lost his Nan now. So sad!
As always, your writing was wonderful and I can't wait for more!
OMGKG! haha That was funny! I love her reaction - that is, no reaction at all. lol And the scene before them while Mike was explaining why he wasn't who the school thought he was was really sweet. I feel even worse that he lost his Nan now. So sad!
As always, your writing was wonderful and I can't wait for more!
9/9/2008 c21 
12Amorelle
XD *can't stop laughing*
Oh my gosh I flipping love you!
That was so freaking hilarious! I was not expecting the mom to be there!
Oh my gosh I started laughing so loud.
haha That was a great twist and at least we know the mom's going to be alright with it. It'll probably be the dad who goes rawr on them.
and Mike's story was sweet with his Grandma ;-;
I lurve you
*gives you a cookie*
~Amorelle
12AmorelleXD *can't stop laughing*
Oh my gosh I flipping love you!
That was so freaking hilarious! I was not expecting the mom to be there!
Oh my gosh I started laughing so loud.
haha That was a great twist and at least we know the mom's going to be alright with it. It'll probably be the dad who goes rawr on them.
and Mike's story was sweet with his Grandma ;-;
I lurve you
*gives you a cookie*
~Amorelle
9/9/2008 c21 Sychaeus
X-files references and Mrs Jones is awesome!
I'm glad we got some info on Mike, or rather, confirmation on what had already been guessed.
hurrah for updates!
X-files references and Mrs Jones is awesome!
I'm glad we got some info on Mike, or rather, confirmation on what had already been guessed.
hurrah for updates!
9/8/2008 c21 3Vera Dicere
o brilliant! i had hoped that nick's mum would react so completely blase to finding out about the two of them- she just seems like not much phases her. which is kind of amazing, considering the positions she's caught nick and mike in...
i really liked nick's internal angsting after mike's departure. it seemed really spot on- all those stupid little things that make you insecure at the start of a new relationship, and especially a new relationship with someone older/more experienced. and then mike's worry that nick would drop him when he found out that about the lies and all. i pretty much adore them both.
still utterly loving this story. basically, still utterly loving -you- as your stories seem to top my favorites these days. looking forward to more! :)
3Vera Dicereo brilliant! i had hoped that nick's mum would react so completely blase to finding out about the two of them- she just seems like not much phases her. which is kind of amazing, considering the positions she's caught nick and mike in...
i really liked nick's internal angsting after mike's departure. it seemed really spot on- all those stupid little things that make you insecure at the start of a new relationship, and especially a new relationship with someone older/more experienced. and then mike's worry that nick would drop him when he found out that about the lies and all. i pretty much adore them both.
still utterly loving this story. basically, still utterly loving -you- as your stories seem to top my favorites these days. looking forward to more! :)
9/8/2008 c21 ren
Nick's mum is awesome XD
Nick's mum is awesome XD
9/8/2008 c21 17Cattails
Haha, Nick would be an awesome stalker. He also worries too much. Hm...his father doesn't seem very pleasant...but that whole coffee-maker bit made me laugh. And finally things are explained! Aw, hugs. Nick has made progress ^^ ...and they're going at it again. Heh. They're so spazzy. AHAHAHA! Oh, God. That last bit with his mum...that was PRICELESS. I am still laughing. She's just so easygoing about it. Hahaha. Yeah. Gonna be laughing for awhile. Hee. XD Well, I guess that's one hurdle surpassed!
17CattailsHaha, Nick would be an awesome stalker. He also worries too much. Hm...his father doesn't seem very pleasant...but that whole coffee-maker bit made me laugh. And finally things are explained! Aw, hugs. Nick has made progress ^^ ...and they're going at it again. Heh. They're so spazzy. AHAHAHA! Oh, God. That last bit with his mum...that was PRICELESS. I am still laughing. She's just so easygoing about it. Hahaha. Yeah. Gonna be laughing for awhile. Hee. XD Well, I guess that's one hurdle surpassed!
9/8/2008 c21 knits alot
Okay, I just had to review, this chapter was mind blowingly funny! I love his mom. She's just so awesome, everyone should have a mom just like her. I am a mom, I'll try to be like her. His family really is insane. Michael has that pegged correctly. It's going to be hard to beat this chapter. I don't know if you should even try. Let this one be spectacular.
None the less, I eagerly await the next installment. If it's half as good as the last one, it'll be most appreciated. God I love this story.
Okay, I just had to review, this chapter was mind blowingly funny! I love his mom. She's just so awesome, everyone should have a mom just like her. I am a mom, I'll try to be like her. His family really is insane. Michael has that pegged correctly. It's going to be hard to beat this chapter. I don't know if you should even try. Let this one be spectacular.
None the less, I eagerly await the next installment. If it's half as good as the last one, it'll be most appreciated. God I love this story.
9/8/2008 c21 AnnaG.Luv
They are so amazing together. I can't believe how many truly good stories you're able to update some what frequently without losing quality of any of your stories.
They are so amazing together. I can't believe how many truly good stories you're able to update some what frequently without losing quality of any of your stories.
9/8/2008 c21 ChibKo
*shock* What. What. Nick's mom is seriously odd. But so darn amusing. I'm speechless.. Instead of being scandalized over finding out her son is getting it on with one of the lodgers.. She's all, "did you do your homework?" XD Priceless.
*shock* What. What. Nick's mom is seriously odd. But so darn amusing. I'm speechless.. Instead of being scandalized over finding out her son is getting it on with one of the lodgers.. She's all, "did you do your homework?" XD Priceless.
9/8/2008 c21 2Pundit
I absolutely LOVE Nick's mom. She's totally awesome. I can't say if I were in her situation the first thing coming out of my mouth would be "Have you finished your homework?" Brilliant!
2PunditI absolutely LOVE Nick's mom. She's totally awesome. I can't say if I were in her situation the first thing coming out of my mouth would be "Have you finished your homework?" Brilliant!
9/8/2008 c21 1XxAmericanxBeautyxX
All I have to say is that Nick's mom is strange. How could she not be bothered to find both her son and Mike falling to the floor naked, groping each other? She was all indifferent about the whole situation as if it were an everyday occurence. Mother or not, I would be mortified. Can't wait to read more.
1XxAmericanxBeautyxXAll I have to say is that Nick's mom is strange. How could she not be bothered to find both her son and Mike falling to the floor naked, groping each other? She was all indifferent about the whole situation as if it were an everyday occurence. Mother or not, I would be mortified. Can't wait to read more.
9/8/2008 c21 FreeDaChickens
I do like this chapter! We're finally discovering some of the subplots . . . and the ending was just priceless. :) I absolutely love Nick's mom. Absolutely amazing.
I was a little disappointing about finding out the I'm-not-me-I'm-my-brother-thing - much more mundane than I was hoping for. Ahh, it's probably better this way; you're explanation was prety realistic.
Mike's last line seemed a little weird ('Um...d'you want Nick back for dinner?'). It seems like something Nick would ask in relation to Mike (do you want Mike back for dinner). It would make sense for her to throw him out, but why would she throw Nick out?
Anyway, very much enjoyed that chapter, and I can't wait to see the next!
FreeDaChickens
I do like this chapter! We're finally discovering some of the subplots . . . and the ending was just priceless. :) I absolutely love Nick's mom. Absolutely amazing.
I was a little disappointing about finding out the I'm-not-me-I'm-my-brother-thing - much more mundane than I was hoping for. Ahh, it's probably better this way; you're explanation was prety realistic.
Mike's last line seemed a little weird ('Um...d'you want Nick back for dinner?'). It seems like something Nick would ask in relation to Mike (do you want Mike back for dinner). It would make sense for her to throw him out, but why would she throw Nick out?
Anyway, very much enjoyed that chapter, and I can't wait to see the next!
FreeDaChickens