for Out of Bounds1/4/2009 c24 Agarwaen
Wow, you managed to write a Highschool-/Teen-Story that was actually enjoyable and funny. I'm impressed.
Love tha way Nick 's all emotiona teenager-i, but still totally loveabel, makes him feel very real and beleavable.
Also Dougie is disturbingly cool.
All your caracters have this real person feel to them, which you find raerly enough in the storys on this site.
Plus, the British English? Beautifull, Abso-fucking-lutely beautifull.
Thanks.
Now I'm off to read through your othe storys.
-Agarwaen
Wow, you managed to write a Highschool-/Teen-Story that was actually enjoyable and funny. I'm impressed.
Love tha way Nick 's all emotiona teenager-i, but still totally loveabel, makes him feel very real and beleavable.
Also Dougie is disturbingly cool.
All your caracters have this real person feel to them, which you find raerly enough in the storys on this site.
Plus, the British English? Beautifull, Abso-fucking-lutely beautifull.
Thanks.
Now I'm off to read through your othe storys.
-Agarwaen
12/25/2008 c2 bobthebuilder6
ah the beep test , pure torture . i think i have it right after the break actually.. grr.. stupid fitness testing.
ahem, anywho.
i kinda heart dougie
ah the beep test , pure torture . i think i have it right after the break actually.. grr.. stupid fitness testing.
ahem, anywho.
i kinda heart dougie
12/22/2008 c24 
11My Chemical Music Box
Wow, I really enjoyed this.
And it had me in stitches on many occasions! XD
Keep up the good work!
=D
11My Chemical Music BoxWow, I really enjoyed this.
And it had me in stitches on many occasions! XD
Keep up the good work!
=D
12/19/2008 c25 11his terrible beauty
ah! mate. i loved it!
seriously, it's pretty effing impossible to find stories in british english on this site, but even if it wasn't, i'd be saying the same thing...
it's bloody brilliant.
;)
11his terrible beautyah! mate. i loved it!
seriously, it's pretty effing impossible to find stories in british english on this site, but even if it wasn't, i'd be saying the same thing...
it's bloody brilliant.
;)
12/1/2008 c25 4frolic-horror
Thanks for writing this wonderful story. I found the characters refreshing. They are far from being perfect or particularly lovable, but the reader still feels very attached to them. Really loved the Doug+Charles couple. Too bad there wasn't more of them and their crazy pervyness.
I also found your English refreshing :D Cool glossary, by the way. Came in handy.
Frolic H.
4frolic-horrorThanks for writing this wonderful story. I found the characters refreshing. They are far from being perfect or particularly lovable, but the reader still feels very attached to them. Really loved the Doug+Charles couple. Too bad there wasn't more of them and their crazy pervyness.
I also found your English refreshing :D Cool glossary, by the way. Came in handy.
Frolic H.
11/24/2008 c25 Ninjapocky
I completely loved this story. I love the way you write, especially in Nick's perspective. It's hilarious. I laughed, I cried. It was brilliant.
some phrases from the story will forever stick with me, like the quadriplegic hamsters, and asthmatic goldfish.
*sigh* Well worth the read, thank you.
I completely loved this story. I love the way you write, especially in Nick's perspective. It's hilarious. I laughed, I cried. It was brilliant.
some phrases from the story will forever stick with me, like the quadriplegic hamsters, and asthmatic goldfish.
*sigh* Well worth the read, thank you.
11/16/2008 c25 24fairies and snapple
I love this story! All your characters are so believeable, and real. They sort have this natural flow, and they're all crazy but in this totally unforced way... it's just really great.
I totally want Nick to be my best friend.
24fairies and snappleI love this story! All your characters are so believeable, and real. They sort have this natural flow, and they're all crazy but in this totally unforced way... it's just really great.
I totally want Nick to be my best friend.
11/6/2008 c24 2NakedKing
i think this is one of the best stories ive read on here! i love it to awesomeness! your so great... i think ill check out ur other stories!
2NakedKingi think this is one of the best stories ive read on here! i love it to awesomeness! your so great... i think ill check out ur other stories!
10/29/2008 c25 22The Sham
I love you. I want to marry you and have a ridiculous amount of your children. Hopefully they'll inherit your talent in full and we can sell them on the black market for good money. Sound good?
I love your writing.
XOXOXOX
22The ShamI love you. I want to marry you and have a ridiculous amount of your children. Hopefully they'll inherit your talent in full and we can sell them on the black market for good money. Sound good?
I love your writing.
XOXOXOX
10/4/2008 c17 10xxx-ServantoftheStar-xxx
OMG... how freaky is this? That same exact thing just happened to me today in gym class (the blacking out, not the fooling around in the shower).
SCARY COINCIDENCE!
Freaking awesome story, BTW.
10xxx-ServantoftheStar-xxxOMG... how freaky is this? That same exact thing just happened to me today in gym class (the blacking out, not the fooling around in the shower).
SCARY COINCIDENCE!
Freaking awesome story, BTW.
10/3/2008 c2 13Sirivinda
So did you happen to read that review I left you one or two days ago saying that I wouldn't stalk you? As it happens, I've been... kind of... doing just that since then. It's your own fault for being a talented writer though. Err, yeah. It's got nothing to do with any psychotic tendencies on my part. I also added you to my favourite authors list, which is a first. I really employ much more of a text-based than author-focused approach to reading, so up until a few minutes ago, my favourite authors list was sadly empty. Want to know what won me over? "Lough-bloody-borough". Yup. Sad, but true. Made me think of the American tourist asking for Lougabarouga outside Ley-sester, which sparked both stupid Friday afternoon giggles and favouritism.
Anyways, I've just managed (in my clever and self-obsessed way) to make my review of your story all about myself. I'm still only two chapters in, so it's hard to say much apart from the usual stuff about loving the way you write. When did love (or sex) become about control? Dunno, but it sure makes a story just that little bit extra interesting. Even if it comes in the shape of a geeky mega-perv. Also, I adore the forlorn hippie values of Nick's parents. Isn't that always the case? You grow up and join the ranks of the politically disenfranchised. And then you unfailingly try to make up for it by committing the ultimate comfy middle-class act of purchasing over-priced, fair-trade goods that all (regardless of whether it's clothing or chocolate) seem to be at least half wool.
Uhm, yeah. I'm glad there's another few chapters to this story so that I can postpone all the stuff I ought to be doing for a few hours more.
13SirivindaSo did you happen to read that review I left you one or two days ago saying that I wouldn't stalk you? As it happens, I've been... kind of... doing just that since then. It's your own fault for being a talented writer though. Err, yeah. It's got nothing to do with any psychotic tendencies on my part. I also added you to my favourite authors list, which is a first. I really employ much more of a text-based than author-focused approach to reading, so up until a few minutes ago, my favourite authors list was sadly empty. Want to know what won me over? "Lough-bloody-borough". Yup. Sad, but true. Made me think of the American tourist asking for Lougabarouga outside Ley-sester, which sparked both stupid Friday afternoon giggles and favouritism.
Anyways, I've just managed (in my clever and self-obsessed way) to make my review of your story all about myself. I'm still only two chapters in, so it's hard to say much apart from the usual stuff about loving the way you write. When did love (or sex) become about control? Dunno, but it sure makes a story just that little bit extra interesting. Even if it comes in the shape of a geeky mega-perv. Also, I adore the forlorn hippie values of Nick's parents. Isn't that always the case? You grow up and join the ranks of the politically disenfranchised. And then you unfailingly try to make up for it by committing the ultimate comfy middle-class act of purchasing over-priced, fair-trade goods that all (regardless of whether it's clothing or chocolate) seem to be at least half wool.
Uhm, yeah. I'm glad there's another few chapters to this story so that I can postpone all the stuff I ought to be doing for a few hours more.
10/1/2008 c24 3Abstruse Blue
Well all I can say really is, BLOODY FUDGING BRILLIANT! haha
I simply love your stories because they are so wicked as hell and this is no exception. Once again, brilliant and I wish some guy I liked would say stuff like that to me in the last chapter I'd be goo. Though I might smack him as well later! xD Anyway, I love your style and it was just amazing to read, thanks.
3Abstruse BlueWell all I can say really is, BLOODY FUDGING BRILLIANT! haha
I simply love your stories because they are so wicked as hell and this is no exception. Once again, brilliant and I wish some guy I liked would say stuff like that to me in the last chapter I'd be goo. Though I might smack him as well later! xD Anyway, I love your style and it was just amazing to read, thanks.
9/27/2008 c24 Midnights Scream
It's not cheesy. It's completely adorable and I was grinning so hard and for so long that my face hurts. It's really really REALLY great! glad I found this story and it couldn't have ended better. You're amazing!
It's not cheesy. It's completely adorable and I was grinning so hard and for so long that my face hurts. It's really really REALLY great! glad I found this story and it couldn't have ended better. You're amazing!