for Dose of Your Own1/30/2010 c15 
4Jaden Ink
Okay ONE I love this story... it jsut keeps getting better and better... but wtf Andrew? One minute it's like he likes Cassie and the next likes Kelsey... im getting all confuzzled
4Jaden InkOkay ONE I love this story... it jsut keeps getting better and better... but wtf Andrew? One minute it's like he likes Cassie and the next likes Kelsey... im getting all confuzzled
1/28/2010 c31 4Katie-Maude
Ok, finally I get to review this. I absolutely loved this and can't believe that I'm only finding this now. I took two days to read it, only because I was working though. I hope Kelsey ends up with Andrew. I absolutely love them together. Please update soon. Oh, and congrats on the SKoW Awards nomination.
4Katie-MaudeOk, finally I get to review this. I absolutely loved this and can't believe that I'm only finding this now. I took two days to read it, only because I was working though. I hope Kelsey ends up with Andrew. I absolutely love them together. Please update soon. Oh, and congrats on the SKoW Awards nomination.
1/23/2010 c1 2Skyterra
I noticed something - in the beginning, it is in present tense and somewhere along the way, it changes into past tense.
Good work, though. :)
2SkyterraI noticed something - in the beginning, it is in present tense and somewhere along the way, it changes into past tense.
Good work, though. :)
1/22/2010 c1 ash
i just wanted to let you know i nominated you for best kiss on skow, this story deserves a lot more attention :] update soon, pretty please!
i just wanted to let you know i nominated you for best kiss on skow, this story deserves a lot more attention :] update soon, pretty please!
1/17/2010 c31 8Julia2Cj
I'm looking forward to seeing this resolved. The build-up has been fairly believable, and while in real life pride and vanity might prevail, I'm thinking Kelsey's going to have to suck it up and admit how she feels and Andrew's going to have to do the same.
8Julia2CjI'm looking forward to seeing this resolved. The build-up has been fairly believable, and while in real life pride and vanity might prevail, I'm thinking Kelsey's going to have to suck it up and admit how she feels and Andrew's going to have to do the same.
1/16/2010 c31 1VanillaCentaur
Alright, so it's taken a few minutes for my thoughts to all catch up with me. I read through the entire story last night and the first part of today, going on pretty much nothing but half a cup of coffee. Makes me kinda jittery. One quick note before I get started, I'm not even sure how many chapters back it was, but I noticed you accidentally wrote Brain instead of Brian; just thought I'd mention it. Also, side note, I have that book of useless information and it's kind of awesome. :P
Okay, so, I will admit that a very large part of me wanted her to end up with Brian, and still does. I realize the drama of dating your sister's ex-boyfriend that everyone thinks is a douche would be difficult, but I also think it would be worth it. I mean, honestly, he deserve that chance at happiness, and the two of them are far better suited for each other. Come on, he totally loves her and is trying to make things right when he didn't even do anything wrong. That said, I do realize you probably decided long ago who she would end up with, and my opinion is of little value at this point (there are only two chapters left after all), but I still had to get it in there. Maybe I can sway to his side or something. :P
Also, I like that you've made Kelsey so realistic. She can be pretty dense sometimes, but that just adds to her character, instead of making her the type of character that always has the right responses. On that note, I have no qualms admitting that I absolutely loath Cassandra, more than any other character (props to you, I haven't hated a character that much since my aunt told me to read Twilight... I'm not sure whether you will find the comparison a compliment or not; just realize that I mean it that way because I had such a strong response to one of your characters, other than Brian :P).
Alright, I think I've said all that I was going to say; though I might mention that I vote for Brian one last time. :P Okay, I know, enough. Looking forward to the final chapters.
1VanillaCentaurAlright, so it's taken a few minutes for my thoughts to all catch up with me. I read through the entire story last night and the first part of today, going on pretty much nothing but half a cup of coffee. Makes me kinda jittery. One quick note before I get started, I'm not even sure how many chapters back it was, but I noticed you accidentally wrote Brain instead of Brian; just thought I'd mention it. Also, side note, I have that book of useless information and it's kind of awesome. :P
Okay, so, I will admit that a very large part of me wanted her to end up with Brian, and still does. I realize the drama of dating your sister's ex-boyfriend that everyone thinks is a douche would be difficult, but I also think it would be worth it. I mean, honestly, he deserve that chance at happiness, and the two of them are far better suited for each other. Come on, he totally loves her and is trying to make things right when he didn't even do anything wrong. That said, I do realize you probably decided long ago who she would end up with, and my opinion is of little value at this point (there are only two chapters left after all), but I still had to get it in there. Maybe I can sway to his side or something. :P
Also, I like that you've made Kelsey so realistic. She can be pretty dense sometimes, but that just adds to her character, instead of making her the type of character that always has the right responses. On that note, I have no qualms admitting that I absolutely loath Cassandra, more than any other character (props to you, I haven't hated a character that much since my aunt told me to read Twilight... I'm not sure whether you will find the comparison a compliment or not; just realize that I mean it that way because I had such a strong response to one of your characters, other than Brian :P).
Alright, I think I've said all that I was going to say; though I might mention that I vote for Brian one last time. :P Okay, I know, enough. Looking forward to the final chapters.
1/14/2010 c1 Juliet
Hey, it's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo, the romance site. Your story is on the Hate/Love Romance list. Here's your raving review:
It's dramatic and heart-wrenching, and full of cliffies. Don't you kinda love and hate those too? The family aspect is interesting; it makes the plot move along. Applaud, please.
XOXO,
Juliet
adropofromeo[at]yahoo[dot]com
Hey, it's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo, the romance site. Your story is on the Hate/Love Romance list. Here's your raving review:
It's dramatic and heart-wrenching, and full of cliffies. Don't you kinda love and hate those too? The family aspect is interesting; it makes the plot move along. Applaud, please.
XOXO,
Juliet
adropofromeo[at]yahoo[dot]com
12/24/2009 c31 1Jaliy
I like the story! a wonderful plot-line..its very interesting..and the writing wasn't so bad either!
Great job..
update soon..
Jaliy!~
1JaliyI like the story! a wonderful plot-line..its very interesting..and the writing wasn't so bad either!
Great job..
update soon..
Jaliy!~
12/23/2009 c31 1happy ever afterxx
Amazing story! Seriously it's so well-written and the characters are so well-developed that I'm totally hooked! More soon?
1happy ever afterxxAmazing story! Seriously it's so well-written and the characters are so well-developed that I'm totally hooked! More soon?
12/13/2009 c31 7Sunshine Bear
I am so confused throughout this entire story!
I was all, "WHO IS SHE GOING TO BE WITH?"
I normally know after the first three chapters or so.
It is confusing as hell... but I LOVE IT!
7Sunshine BearI am so confused throughout this entire story!
I was all, "WHO IS SHE GOING TO BE WITH?"
I normally know after the first three chapters or so.
It is confusing as hell... but I LOVE IT!
11/21/2009 c31 RobotBuiltSoFrail
Amazing chapter. Poor Robbie and Kelsey. I really hope Cassandra can either get over herself, or for Rob to get over her, because she certainly doesn't deserve him. I seriously hope Kelsey and Drew work out, it's so depressing right now.
I also enjoyed the whole meeting with her family. Everyone always teases Kelsey about the whole twins thing, but it's great to see the dynamic, and I'm glad her family is a thread in the story. It makes it interesting.
Can't wait for the next chapter, I need some Brian or Andrew
(!) interaction!
Amazing chapter. Poor Robbie and Kelsey. I really hope Cassandra can either get over herself, or for Rob to get over her, because she certainly doesn't deserve him. I seriously hope Kelsey and Drew work out, it's so depressing right now.
I also enjoyed the whole meeting with her family. Everyone always teases Kelsey about the whole twins thing, but it's great to see the dynamic, and I'm glad her family is a thread in the story. It makes it interesting.
Can't wait for the next chapter, I need some Brian or Andrew
(!) interaction!
11/21/2009 c31 5G0bSmackt
Hi there, just wanted to say thanks so much for reviewing my story. Because if you hadn't, I would never have clicked on your name and discovered you wrote this kick-ass story! I don't know why I hadn't found this earlier. How annoying! Anyway, this is an awesome story and totally unpredictable (which I love), and I can't wait for the next chapter!
5G0bSmacktHi there, just wanted to say thanks so much for reviewing my story. Because if you hadn't, I would never have clicked on your name and discovered you wrote this kick-ass story! I don't know why I hadn't found this earlier. How annoying! Anyway, this is an awesome story and totally unpredictable (which I love), and I can't wait for the next chapter!