for Dose of Your Own8/18/2010 c8 
3Kiki Gardens
I'm so glad I came across this! If I hadn't I would definatly be missing out on a REALLY good read right now. You have me hooked!
Keep Writing,
-Kiki
3Kiki GardensI'm so glad I came across this! If I hadn't I would definatly be missing out on a REALLY good read right now. You have me hooked!
Keep Writing,
-Kiki
8/10/2010 c1 2pretitiful
I really liked how the Latin phrase on the back of her shirt was a sexual innuendo. It just made things so hilarious.
2pretitifulI really liked how the Latin phrase on the back of her shirt was a sexual innuendo. It just made things so hilarious.
7/14/2010 c33 lipsalldevilred
That was amazing. I like that you wrote about physical versus emotional attraction. No one's perfect and sometimes you just can't help but control the heart. I'm glad Kelsey ended up with Andrew, even though he was closed off. I definitely understood Andrew at the end, but during the story I couldn't sympathize with him much. I would like to see his perspective occassionally, or at least, the reason why he's so closed off. What happened to him that caused him to be like this?
That was amazing. I like that you wrote about physical versus emotional attraction. No one's perfect and sometimes you just can't help but control the heart. I'm glad Kelsey ended up with Andrew, even though he was closed off. I definitely understood Andrew at the end, but during the story I couldn't sympathize with him much. I would like to see his perspective occassionally, or at least, the reason why he's so closed off. What happened to him that caused him to be like this?
7/8/2010 c16 lipsalldevilred
Ahh I wonder if Andrew was really asleep when he wrapped his arm around Kelsey...sneaky boy!
Ahh I wonder if Andrew was really asleep when he wrapped his arm around Kelsey...sneaky boy!
7/7/2010 c33 1CallMeAutumn
Finished! :D
This was so great to read. I loved the ending. A change was nice; I was starting to get suck of the fact all the past stories I read always had the female making the big mistake ( or not ) and then apologizing. Can't wait for the epilogue, I'm really interested to know what it'll contain.
1CallMeAutumnFinished! :D
This was so great to read. I loved the ending. A change was nice; I was starting to get suck of the fact all the past stories I read always had the female making the big mistake ( or not ) and then apologizing. Can't wait for the epilogue, I'm really interested to know what it'll contain.
7/7/2010 c20 CallMeAutumn
Since I stareted this today I havnt been able to stop! It's so intriguing and captivating. I really CANT WAIT to read what comes next and I'm really rushing to even write this review!
I think your writing great! I love reading it, and I love Kelsey's character.
& I actually like Brian a lot more than I like Andrew, so this chapter made me really happy. :} I don't like HATE Andrew, but I just don't like his personality too much. He's so.. confusing.
I was kind of bummed to find out Robert was dating Cass. As much as I like Brian, I was kinds hoping for some KxR. He seemed really sweet that day he, Andrew and Kels went shopping.
I really don't like Cass though :| I really want to know what she did to cause Brian to do what he did. I have a guess, but I don't think it's right.
Anyway! Can't wait to keep reading!
Since I stareted this today I havnt been able to stop! It's so intriguing and captivating. I really CANT WAIT to read what comes next and I'm really rushing to even write this review!
I think your writing great! I love reading it, and I love Kelsey's character.
& I actually like Brian a lot more than I like Andrew, so this chapter made me really happy. :} I don't like HATE Andrew, but I just don't like his personality too much. He's so.. confusing.
I was kind of bummed to find out Robert was dating Cass. As much as I like Brian, I was kinds hoping for some KxR. He seemed really sweet that day he, Andrew and Kels went shopping.
I really don't like Cass though :| I really want to know what she did to cause Brian to do what he did. I have a guess, but I don't think it's right.
Anyway! Can't wait to keep reading!
6/30/2010 c33 5jaliwo
I love your story and I read on your profile that you're writing an epilogue. I hope you do, because although I'm glad Kelsey and Drew got together there are a few loose ends that I hope will be addressed.
I love how you describe everything in such detail...it's like you're literally looking out from Kelsey's head as to what's going on about her. Also, I liked the summary you had before about what the story is about, something about the lies people tell to cover up the truth? That's what drew me to the story in the first place. Anyway, great job and hopefully you'll post the epilogue soon.
5jaliwoI love your story and I read on your profile that you're writing an epilogue. I hope you do, because although I'm glad Kelsey and Drew got together there are a few loose ends that I hope will be addressed.
I love how you describe everything in such detail...it's like you're literally looking out from Kelsey's head as to what's going on about her. Also, I liked the summary you had before about what the story is about, something about the lies people tell to cover up the truth? That's what drew me to the story in the first place. Anyway, great job and hopefully you'll post the epilogue soon.
6/16/2010 c33 3AJS
Gah. I love this story, but I don't really have that much to say about it since I actually finished it a few days ago so it's no longer really fresh in my mind. I guess at the point where she was kissing Brian for the freaking 3rd time, I really hated her and I thought to myself, "This is so much like Twilight," but I guess it's not. I mean... I like how you separated it between physical attraction and... attraction? For the lack of better ways to put it, haha. Just like... even though when she was kissing Andrew again after the second time she kissed Brian, her thought was, "How could I have ever wanted to give this up?" because of the FEELING, but after the 3rd time, it ultimately came down to the person, not the physical feeling she got when she kissed him, which I liked. It made it very real, I guess. I'm just amazed that Andrew forgave her three times. I guess the first time Brian kissed her she didn't like it at all, and it wasn't cheating at all, so it was all okay and he couldn't really do anything about it... but he totally had a right to be pissed the 3rd time.
I guess I feel like Brian wasn't mentioned enough in the beginning chapters though. I know it was a little understandable because the plan was still in its developing stages, but I kind of felt like the part about hers and Brian's relationship wasn't built up enough or something. Like I was kind of going "wtf" when she kept saying how Brian knew her so well, because none of that was ever really shown. The only hint of that was just that he said she's too nice to hate him, but other than that it didn't actually seem like Brian knew Kelsey at all.
I'm really glad that ultimately it was Kelsey & Andrew. :) They really were just the best for each other. And it's totally obvious that Andrew liked her since middle school haha, and also ridiculously cute! I guess it's sad to see that Kelsey & Cassandra never mended their friendship, and also Cassandra and Robert for that matter, but I guess that relationship just never would have really worked out. Robert was way too good for her and it was all built on lies.
Haha anyway love this story. I have no idea why it was only nominated for Best Kiss for SkoW... definitely deserved a lot more than just that! Please keep writing and keep up the good work. I miss Kels & Andrew already.
- Alyssa
3AJSGah. I love this story, but I don't really have that much to say about it since I actually finished it a few days ago so it's no longer really fresh in my mind. I guess at the point where she was kissing Brian for the freaking 3rd time, I really hated her and I thought to myself, "This is so much like Twilight," but I guess it's not. I mean... I like how you separated it between physical attraction and... attraction? For the lack of better ways to put it, haha. Just like... even though when she was kissing Andrew again after the second time she kissed Brian, her thought was, "How could I have ever wanted to give this up?" because of the FEELING, but after the 3rd time, it ultimately came down to the person, not the physical feeling she got when she kissed him, which I liked. It made it very real, I guess. I'm just amazed that Andrew forgave her three times. I guess the first time Brian kissed her she didn't like it at all, and it wasn't cheating at all, so it was all okay and he couldn't really do anything about it... but he totally had a right to be pissed the 3rd time.
I guess I feel like Brian wasn't mentioned enough in the beginning chapters though. I know it was a little understandable because the plan was still in its developing stages, but I kind of felt like the part about hers and Brian's relationship wasn't built up enough or something. Like I was kind of going "wtf" when she kept saying how Brian knew her so well, because none of that was ever really shown. The only hint of that was just that he said she's too nice to hate him, but other than that it didn't actually seem like Brian knew Kelsey at all.
I'm really glad that ultimately it was Kelsey & Andrew. :) They really were just the best for each other. And it's totally obvious that Andrew liked her since middle school haha, and also ridiculously cute! I guess it's sad to see that Kelsey & Cassandra never mended their friendship, and also Cassandra and Robert for that matter, but I guess that relationship just never would have really worked out. Robert was way too good for her and it was all built on lies.
Haha anyway love this story. I have no idea why it was only nominated for Best Kiss for SkoW... definitely deserved a lot more than just that! Please keep writing and keep up the good work. I miss Kels & Andrew already.
- Alyssa
6/15/2010 c33 2into the black
I am so upset that Kelsey didn't end up with Brian. I actually liked him a whole lot more than Andrew..
2into the blackI am so upset that Kelsey didn't end up with Brian. I actually liked him a whole lot more than Andrew..
5/27/2010 c33 1storiesrock
aw that was such a cute story! i absolutely loved it. i was so scared that kelsey and andrew wouldn't be together by the end, but that would be too mean Lol =] Great Job!
1storiesrockaw that was such a cute story! i absolutely loved it. i was so scared that kelsey and andrew wouldn't be together by the end, but that would be too mean Lol =] Great Job!
5/25/2010 c33 1sherbetsi
This was amazing! I've had this on my 'To Read' list for god knows how long but it always got shoved a little to back burner because it was pretty long and wasnt finished. But now that I've read it I cant help but wish it was even longer. The last chapter, when I got there, I just didnt want it to end.
I loved the complexity of the plot and how you managed to smoothly weave plot threads throughout so that none of them really felt neglected at any time which is a big problem that a load of writers here on FP have. I love how Andrew was so closed off that i doubts on whether he actually liked her and whether or not they were going to end up together. I hate the obvious and that doubt was made the story something special against all those other 'enemy' cliches out there. I got a bit confused about the Sandy thing but it was actually really good and not at all petty in the way that people seem to stereotype cheerleaders as petty bimbos who just steal bfs and act as sluts.
It was refreshing and sure it needs a bit of editing for grammar, spelling and clarity at some points but it was really good and has the potential to be even better.
Sian x
1sherbetsiThis was amazing! I've had this on my 'To Read' list for god knows how long but it always got shoved a little to back burner because it was pretty long and wasnt finished. But now that I've read it I cant help but wish it was even longer. The last chapter, when I got there, I just didnt want it to end.
I loved the complexity of the plot and how you managed to smoothly weave plot threads throughout so that none of them really felt neglected at any time which is a big problem that a load of writers here on FP have. I love how Andrew was so closed off that i doubts on whether he actually liked her and whether or not they were going to end up together. I hate the obvious and that doubt was made the story something special against all those other 'enemy' cliches out there. I got a bit confused about the Sandy thing but it was actually really good and not at all petty in the way that people seem to stereotype cheerleaders as petty bimbos who just steal bfs and act as sluts.
It was refreshing and sure it needs a bit of editing for grammar, spelling and clarity at some points but it was really good and has the potential to be even better.
Sian x