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3/19/2011 c1 2dragonflydreamer
Great metaphor here! It's really so true, haha. I love how you don't just lay down a metaphor and drop it; you pick out details of the image and keep drawing parallels. The depth you go to makes this piece really creative and unique.

I really liked the stanza about withdrawals. The tone shifted so drastically I could just /feel/ the emotions attached to your words. Impressive manipulation of your readers.

I thought the wording got a little loose toward the end. You didn't have as many strong images and the word choice wasn't very strong. Still, I enjoyed the piece as a whole. It made me smile at the simplicity but also think about some more serious point you brought up.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
8/19/2008 c1 1broken'down-over.and.over
exactly how i feel

great
1/9/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
Great poem. It made me smile. I can completely relate. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
10/28/2007 c1 58Next Exit
nice little prose piece...

"write hand"

cute pun :P

well written and thought out.

-cat
10/25/2007 c1 57empathic life
Darling... Sigh. You write so wonderfully. I like this. It's... funny, true, and... amazing. Agh. I can't leave a proper review right now. I'm sorry. But this is amazing, really. It made me smile. ^^ Love you. Sorry I'm such a bad penpal... -.- Yours, e.l.
10/11/2007 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Marvelous. "we'd rather cut off our-write hand-than give up", is a remarkable wordtwist. The conceptualization, and comparison of this helps the reader understand the drive, and will of a true writer. Good work. MD:77.
10/11/2007 c1 33WyrdWolf
The ending of this is subtly powerful; I really like it. The concept is something to love, too.

I've been through the withdrawl! I haven't really written since school started. Ow. _

Nice work, vixen. It captures the essence of writing's soul-squeezing bind (to be pleasant about it). ^^

Wolfie
10/9/2007 c1 829Anaare
A nice sentiment and true, in cases. As always, an intriguing lay-out and overall form. I did most enjoy that capital letter of Passion, very interesting and wonderful touch. A good poem is all I can say.
10/9/2007 c1 38DeathMetal18
nice. So true. I like this a lot (two words HA!) sorry, The voices in my head are taking over. Tee hee! I win. Damn. Anywho, thanks for the reviews, they were awsome. Well, catch ya later.

-TwilightWolf

-And Pinbky the Pitbull... Get outa my head!
10/7/2007 c1 163sharks don't sleep
Oh, it reminds me of NaNoWriMo. Anyway.

Love this a lot. Wonderful description; I espescially love the "ever-filling bottle" part.

Falcon
10/7/2007 c1 18Sir Scott
Wow, that's true. Writing is an addiction. You really captured the feelings of every true writer. I'm going to put this one in my favorites.

~SirScott
10/7/2007 c1 54Artemis Anderson
I like this. Very well done. Very good descriptions. d:D

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