1/2/2011 c1 23fatbird33
good concept, but i was almost expecting there to be some hope in the end. maybe make each section longer. go further into the stories of each, maybe that will help :)
good concept, but i was almost expecting there to be some hope in the end. maybe make each section longer. go further into the stories of each, maybe that will help :)
12/9/2007 c1 62Oracle of Destiny
This is actually well written and I really liked it! I can relate to this as I've felt this way last month or so. The word choice were interesting. Keep up with the good work :)
This is actually well written and I really liked it! I can relate to this as I've felt this way last month or so. The word choice were interesting. Keep up with the good work :)