for Mental Breakdown10/9/2007 c1 
56Luna Turner
Oh God. It's not fair! I want your writing! WAH! Just kidding.
Cheers! ~Kat
56Luna TurnerOh God. It's not fair! I want your writing! WAH! Just kidding.
Cheers! ~Kat
10/8/2007 c1 10EternallyImperfect
I love they way you wrote this. It's confusing with a subtle touch of weird, but that fits the theme nicely.
It also has a soft, pleasant flow.
My opinion-It's a nice but strange poem. A fine piece of art. It's more prose than poetry, though.
~Imperfect
10EternallyImperfectI love they way you wrote this. It's confusing with a subtle touch of weird, but that fits the theme nicely.
It also has a soft, pleasant flow.
My opinion-It's a nice but strange poem. A fine piece of art. It's more prose than poetry, though.
~Imperfect
10/8/2007 c1 Arafax
Interesting way to describe a mental breakdown. Very nice job on this. Well written and to the point.
~Arafax~
Interesting way to describe a mental breakdown. Very nice job on this. Well written and to the point.
~Arafax~