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10/21/2007 c1 65Stella Grimshaw
Well, you basically captured the essence of love in less than 7 lines. Kudos. I really like the repetition of "I" too, good use of all the senses as well.
10/8/2007 c1 Sir Scott
I liked this poem. It does paint a picture of someone who is truly in love and their feelings toward their lover.

~SirScott

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