for Lone Lotus9/8/2010 c1 
4Naomi Hansen
I know how you feel about the whole "no idea on how to do this" thing - I'm dealing with something similar right now. Except for me, I have to do this for a school assignment. Which is due tomorrow. And I'm starting to panic because I have no clue on how to write any kind of poem. (Except for a haiku). D:
As you've probably noticed, I'm no poem expert. But even I have to admit that this was nice. Loved the slightly hidden meaning of it. I'd critique this, but like I said, I wouldn't know what to look out for.
Auf Wiedersehen!
-Naomi Hansen
4Naomi HansenI know how you feel about the whole "no idea on how to do this" thing - I'm dealing with something similar right now. Except for me, I have to do this for a school assignment. Which is due tomorrow. And I'm starting to panic because I have no clue on how to write any kind of poem. (Except for a haiku). D:
As you've probably noticed, I'm no poem expert. But even I have to admit that this was nice. Loved the slightly hidden meaning of it. I'd critique this, but like I said, I wouldn't know what to look out for.
Auf Wiedersehen!
-Naomi Hansen
4/14/2009 c1 Icyfire4w5
Aw, I find this poem quite depressing. Nevertheless, I still love its conciseness.
Aw, I find this poem quite depressing. Nevertheless, I still love its conciseness.
2/24/2008 c1 16Crysta Mayville
Wow, that was great! You would have never known it was your first free verse poem!
16Crysta MayvilleWow, that was great! You would have never known it was your first free verse poem!
2/16/2008 c1 11Ivory Willow
That's a good question. love your images!
Beauty is not fun unless you have someone/something to share it with.
I just wish more people would like reading poetry.
There are way too many poems that don't have reviews but they deserve them.
11Ivory WillowThat's a good question. love your images!
Beauty is not fun unless you have someone/something to share it with.
I just wish more people would like reading poetry.
There are way too many poems that don't have reviews but they deserve them.
2/3/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I love how it seems to be just about a lotus and the end makes it about so much more
The nature imagery and personification was really great
One thing the two lines Everyone envies you/You are beautiful.. repeating you seemed off to me...
Other than that it was a wonderfully written piece... great job especially for your first try at free verse
612simpleplan13I love how it seems to be just about a lotus and the end makes it about so much more
The nature imagery and personification was really great
One thing the two lines Everyone envies you/You are beautiful.. repeating you seemed off to me...
Other than that it was a wonderfully written piece... great job especially for your first try at free verse
10/17/2007 c1 25TylerB
Hey Loona thanks for the review on one of my older poems! You said you have no idea how to write free verse poetry, but here's the deal, there is no specific way on how to write free verse. I think you did a wonderful job on this one. The flow is right on and its descriptiveness is great. Good job!
25TylerBHey Loona thanks for the review on one of my older poems! You said you have no idea how to write free verse poetry, but here's the deal, there is no specific way on how to write free verse. I think you did a wonderful job on this one. The flow is right on and its descriptiveness is great. Good job!
10/11/2007 c1 32Little Hobbit
I like this, it's very well done. I like how you had the short couple of lines in between the longer lines. Good imagery and choice of words, and I like the meaning behind it. Good stuff :)
Little Hobbit ^.^
32Little HobbitI like this, it's very well done. I like how you had the short couple of lines in between the longer lines. Good imagery and choice of words, and I like the meaning behind it. Good stuff :)
Little Hobbit ^.^
10/8/2007 c1 97rust phoenix
Pretty poem, I like the flow to it and the imagery. It's a bit simplistic, but it's good.
97rust phoenixPretty poem, I like the flow to it and the imagery. It's a bit simplistic, but it's good.
10/8/2007 c1 6xEmoMuffinx
It's good! Except the verses are a bit unbalanced in length. Except the last and first are the same length, and the second and second last are also the same length. Ooh, I sense a pattern.
6xEmoMuffinxIt's good! Except the verses are a bit unbalanced in length. Except the last and first are the same length, and the second and second last are also the same length. Ooh, I sense a pattern.