12/3/2008 c4 1Satan's Angelic Mistress
Hm. Was Braelyn ever pregnant? Because it was the only logical reasoning I could ever think of for her switching schools in Eiffel Tower, especially with that girl... Paris' random hook-up who was all like "Braelyn said Sebastian was really supportive."

Gabe is cool. [= You're right though, there was closure for Paris and Seb and they didn't really need another story.

7/20/2008 c4 52Liviania
That's cool. No need to force something - I'd rather get a superior product when you're feeling it.

Livi

6/2/2008 c4 rawr
You did end The Eiffel Tower wonderfully. At first I wondered why you were writing a sequel (I don't particularly like sequels even though it's always so sad when things end), but I didn't question it because I believe that you aren't a decent writer, you are an incredible one. Plus Seb and Paris are adorable. Anyway, I consider The Eiffel Tower to be one of the most outstanding slash stories ever written on fictionpress. Most of the people I know will agree that if they have read slash here on fictionpress then they have read your story. Good luck with Electric Feel. I'll be following closely. Love ya.

5/21/2008 c3 forbiddenstars
wonderful!

the sequel promises to be as good as if not better than eiffel! keep writing and updating!

ps. kinda curious. who's top and who's bottom between seba and paris? it sounds like its top-paris, but that seems so...idunno. isn't paris really skinny? =laughs= either way is ok, but i wish i could know for sure.

2/10/2008 c3 amber
Eiffel Tower was a really good fic. It would be difficult to match it, but this fic seems to be coming along well.

Disliked the first chapter, but the other two made up for it.

I have one grouse though. I can't see why Seb & Paris are together. They don't seem to gel as well as they did in the earlier story. You need to work on this.

Keep writing. You do have a lot of talent & this story has potential.

1/8/2008 c3 sana
update soon please. waiting for the next installment.

umm,just visited the site to see if there were any new updates n glanced at the reviews. looks like there was a typo-i've mentioned Eiffel Tower as EF instead of ET. the thing is thats the way i've saved it on my hardrive- the name has stuck i guess. i'm probably liable to use it later too . sorry.

happy new year. hope u establish a great relationship with ur muses in 2008.

12/17/2007 c3 sana
first of all, thanx 4 starting the sequel. i loved the Eiffel Tower (EF)- u created such adorable characters - Paris being my favourite, of course. loved Seb too.

this is coming along well. i didn't like the 1st chapter much-was a bit stiff... but u picked up the flow from the 2nd chapter -

in the Eiffel Tower, no matter how superficial the interaction between Seb n Paris might have been, there was always an underlying thread of intimacy n affection - it was one of the things i loved about it - although Paris might be acting like a jerk or Seb as a idiot it was obvious that the boys really cared about each other. that's missing a little in the 1st chapter here - u can't understand why they are together there.

but like i said it starts to pick up in the 2nd chapter - Paris' POV was in keeping with the tone of EF. well done.

I think Seb's 2nd POV is much better - but I think u can do better - all the best.

a bit more stuff about how they interact together, thrown in with a bit of Paris' snarky sense of humour & childishness would make it perfect.

the interaction between Paris & Hero was quite well done too. But a bit more about the interaction between the Brien family & S+P would be nice.

Hey, how about a one-shot where S+P tell Paris' parents about them. it would be interesting.

will their school friends also make an appearance later in the story? - i hope so - u had created good characters- i hope u don't let them go...



its good to have the boys S+P back. pl continue the good work.

12/10/2007 c2 magalina
It was nice to see Hero again :P And I still adore paris.