for The Emerged10/11/2007 c1 Jessica
SAM!
This story is pure genius. I felt like I was part of it and you left me on edge. I really enjoyed the plot and descriptions. You should really consider a career in this.
SAM!
This story is pure genius. I felt like I was part of it and you left me on edge. I really enjoyed the plot and descriptions. You should really consider a career in this.
10/11/2007 c1 Mnesomne's Tears
I like it. I'll watch it, I wanna see where its gonna go. Are we gonna meet more 'special people?'
I like it. I'll watch it, I wanna see where its gonna go. Are we gonna meet more 'special people?'
10/11/2007 c1 
19Core Satiated
If you turned this into a novel, I'd buy it. I am usually a horror or fantasy reader, but I hung on your every word here. This story was so good, I dreaded reading the the last sentence. You writing of the fight sequences was flawless. I saw it all happen, as if I were in a booth witnessing it for myself. Welcome to my favorites. PLEASE continue...
19Core SatiatedIf you turned this into a novel, I'd buy it. I am usually a horror or fantasy reader, but I hung on your every word here. This story was so good, I dreaded reading the the last sentence. You writing of the fight sequences was flawless. I saw it all happen, as if I were in a booth witnessing it for myself. Welcome to my favorites. PLEASE continue...
10/11/2007 c1 6The Burnin' Rose
dam, ur good. your ocabulary is expertice and your description os above average. Im liking the story and the feel of it. so much was seen in such a small chapter. ill keep reading if u keep updating.
6The Burnin' Rosedam, ur good. your ocabulary is expertice and your description os above average. Im liking the story and the feel of it. so much was seen in such a small chapter. ill keep reading if u keep updating.