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12/31/2009 c15 7adoh
This is a really good story - a lot better than some of the ones with hundreds of reviews. I really enjoyed it. (:
1/23/2009 c15 Essie
Your first chapter is strong enough to be a stand alone one shot. Oh and amzaingly precise spelling and grammar! =P
10/12/2007 c1 1Maine
I loved this piece. First the repetition at the beginning and then the lovely descriptive words used perfectly throughout the duration. It was just the right amount of detail. Enough to get a visual and yet keep the mystery of the piece and let imgination play a part.

It was beautifully written. The explanation at the end was simple and it really tied the piece together in a circle with the use of 'miss' again.



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