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for Her One And Only Fear

10/11/2007 c1 15NekoKaji
Wow. Thought-provoking and moving poem. Wow, wow, wow. I love this very much. I'm not sure, but I think there may be a few grammatical errors here and there-which I am also often guilty of myself-and those are all fixable things. I think this is fabulous overall, and brilliantly worded and set up. You should definitely keep it up :]!
10/11/2007 c1 306Ashelin
Oh. This was a lot more depressing than I had imagined it would be. Just goes to show you not to make assumptions. I thought the ryming was well done, except for the choices/bruises thing, but I suck at rhyming so it doesn't realy matter. Anyway, great job, really enjoyed this.

Ashelin

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