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11/16/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
I love all the repetition and the whole picture thing is great.. especially the ending.. great piece
10/20/2007 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Aww, this is cute. I love "photo.paper boy" and then "not everyone could be a r.a.i.n.b.o.w." I'm unsure why you chose to use the periods where you did, but in any case, it's a cute poem. Keep writing! :)
10/20/2007 c1 38secret thoughts revealed
i can really relate to this one so did the guy ever figure it out?
10/14/2007 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konnichi wa

Aww, that was a really sweet - sortof dispairing, forlorn - ending. :) I liked it.

Zaijen

-Shan-
10/14/2007 c1 81thursdays and rain
aww, cute ;)

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