for Live Through You3/1/2008 c1 
164Lady Fingers
everything about this poem is so relateably
"You see it at pageants
moms with crow's feet
trying to hang on to beauty
slipping through their fingers like
hourglass sand
dressing their little girls like sluts"
amazing amazing stanza there
164Lady Fingerseverything about this poem is so relateably
"You see it at pageants
moms with crow's feet
trying to hang on to beauty
slipping through their fingers like
hourglass sand
dressing their little girls like sluts"
amazing amazing stanza there
12/4/2007 c1 65Stella Grimshaw
I loved a lot of the wording in this, just the newborn babies head description was beautiful.
65Stella GrimshawI loved a lot of the wording in this, just the newborn babies head description was beautiful.
10/14/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Such a sweet poem. I really like it.
Your penname is cool.
Good luck with poetry and life.
Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrSuch a sweet poem. I really like it.
Your penname is cool.
Good luck with poetry and life.
Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
10/14/2007 c1 8find-a-new-way
great job!im expecting more and more out of you!your getting better and better each time .keep up the good work!xD
8find-a-new-waygreat job!im expecting more and more out of you!your getting better and better each time .keep up the good work!xD