for Lips Burn Caustic10/20/2007 c4 
8Scene-Damagexx
I love Alex Evans, Matthew Lush and Jeffree Star too, hahaha. Especially Alex Evans. I liked him looking like a little kid, I mean, geez, I just wanted to shrink him and shove him in my pocket. I mean, I still do, but it's just not the same. xD
HAHA Everett is a myspace whore gonna turn Scene King. Yummy. XD That's pretty funny, I have to say. Then again, I guess the appeal gets all scene kids/emo kids eventually.
The new Scary Kids CD is pretty good, I've got to agree. My favorite new album of this year though is Bone Palace Ballet by Chiodos. It's amazing.
And FFTL! My best friend and I LOVED them for the longest time. Matt Good is basically awesome...so's Derek Bloom. I still like them a lot, but until I hear some of their new music without Sonny, they aren't in my top five or ten. I need to do that. Um. Jono Evans is really hot. Yeah, Jono!
*cough* OK, I'm done rambling for today, I believe. Haha.
Looking forward to chapter 5!
8Scene-DamagexxI love Alex Evans, Matthew Lush and Jeffree Star too, hahaha. Especially Alex Evans. I liked him looking like a little kid, I mean, geez, I just wanted to shrink him and shove him in my pocket. I mean, I still do, but it's just not the same. xD
HAHA Everett is a myspace whore gonna turn Scene King. Yummy. XD That's pretty funny, I have to say. Then again, I guess the appeal gets all scene kids/emo kids eventually.
The new Scary Kids CD is pretty good, I've got to agree. My favorite new album of this year though is Bone Palace Ballet by Chiodos. It's amazing.
And FFTL! My best friend and I LOVED them for the longest time. Matt Good is basically awesome...so's Derek Bloom. I still like them a lot, but until I hear some of their new music without Sonny, they aren't in my top five or ten. I need to do that. Um. Jono Evans is really hot. Yeah, Jono!
*cough* OK, I'm done rambling for today, I believe. Haha.
Looking forward to chapter 5!
10/18/2007 c3 Scene-Damagexx
Crazy thing: I'm just finishing up Spirit Week right now xD Today was Random Day...it was really weird, but totally awesome. I've been going all out, since I'm a Junior and all that fun stuff. :]
Leeches scare the living hell out of me. One time, I was up in Oregon and well, there was this bionic leech. IT WOULDN'T DIE!
And the Freshmen at my school remind me of the really annoying girls in this story. Thankfully, none of spazzed out about me sharing a can of Monster with my friend Kyle.
Enough rambling. Rosco shouldn't go to homecoming because homecoming dances are lame. My school is cool and has a homecoming Concert, since uh, that's what non-dancing schools do after a fun game of football. . I don't like transition chapters much, but I think you pulled this one off nice.
Now I have to go bake and burn a CD. Looking forward to the next chapter! =D And sorry for all the rambling...
Crazy thing: I'm just finishing up Spirit Week right now xD Today was Random Day...it was really weird, but totally awesome. I've been going all out, since I'm a Junior and all that fun stuff. :]
Leeches scare the living hell out of me. One time, I was up in Oregon and well, there was this bionic leech. IT WOULDN'T DIE!
And the Freshmen at my school remind me of the really annoying girls in this story. Thankfully, none of spazzed out about me sharing a can of Monster with my friend Kyle.
Enough rambling. Rosco shouldn't go to homecoming because homecoming dances are lame. My school is cool and has a homecoming Concert, since uh, that's what non-dancing schools do after a fun game of football. . I don't like transition chapters much, but I think you pulled this one off nice.
Now I have to go bake and burn a CD. Looking forward to the next chapter! =D And sorry for all the rambling...
10/18/2007 c1 5burntwater
Ok, so I only read the first chapter so far. I think it was great. And also, I read Stephen Chbosky's The Perks of Being a Wallflower - my favorite book! It was an awesome chapter. Awesome awesome job writing it.
5burntwaterOk, so I only read the first chapter so far. I think it was great. And also, I read Stephen Chbosky's The Perks of Being a Wallflower - my favorite book! It was an awesome chapter. Awesome awesome job writing it.
10/18/2007 c3 1sweets555
its not horrible! not at all.
but feel free to update tonite away!
grr. i know girls like abby...im not fond of them. but im sure ull make it better!
1sweets555its not horrible! not at all.
but feel free to update tonite away!
grr. i know girls like abby...im not fond of them. but im sure ull make it better!
10/17/2007 c1 8Scene-Damagexx
haha this story made me giggle. I love it. :]
So yeah, do me a big, big favor and update like...as much as you can. I want to know what happens.
Everett sounds hot.
And Chiodos is pretty much freaking amazing. So is Mayday Parade. Yeah.
:D
8Scene-Damagexxhaha this story made me giggle. I love it. :]
So yeah, do me a big, big favor and update like...as much as you can. I want to know what happens.
Everett sounds hot.
And Chiodos is pretty much freaking amazing. So is Mayday Parade. Yeah.
:D
10/17/2007 c2 i found alaska
your story is pretty freaking rad. i like it.
oh, yeah, and alesana is uh-mazing :]
your story is pretty freaking rad. i like it.
oh, yeah, and alesana is uh-mazing :]
10/17/2007 c2 Young Love
the main person in here, is it a boy or a girl?
other than that, this story is interestiny. keep writing!
the main person in here, is it a boy or a girl?
other than that, this story is interestiny. keep writing!
10/16/2007 c2 1sweets555
hehe.
well darling, id love to marry you, but i dont think my BF would be okay with that. sorry.
i agree, the catcher is a terrible book.
good chapter!
1sweets555hehe.
well darling, id love to marry you, but i dont think my BF would be okay with that. sorry.
i agree, the catcher is a terrible book.
good chapter!
10/15/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Great beginning. I know people who are homophobic. I am not, but I thought you did a wonderful job expressing your main character's emotions. I'm sure he'll get over his homophobia eventually. ;)
Looking forward to more.
Cute penname with the Russian and the meaning of the Russian word.
Good luck with writing, this story, and life.
Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrGreat beginning. I know people who are homophobic. I am not, but I thought you did a wonderful job expressing your main character's emotions. I'm sure he'll get over his homophobia eventually. ;)
Looking forward to more.
Cute penname with the Russian and the meaning of the Russian word.
Good luck with writing, this story, and life.
Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~