for The House of Empty Air9/21/2009 c1 
9Narq
Wow, this is a masterpiece. It's a long poem, but a good one. They say that a poem should take you on a journy, and this one sure does. I loved the way there was the rythem in it and it made me want to read the whole thing out loud. I loved the way that you actually had characters in it and that the characters had distinct personalities. You used wonderfully strong words, "splinter", "smite", "chill" and so on, lovely, lovely, descriptions, and I especially enjoyed the formatting: it was really well structured and I'd say it's the best poem I've read in AGES!
Narq.
P.S. don't forget to point me to another story of yours~ :)
9NarqWow, this is a masterpiece. It's a long poem, but a good one. They say that a poem should take you on a journy, and this one sure does. I loved the way there was the rythem in it and it made me want to read the whole thing out loud. I loved the way that you actually had characters in it and that the characters had distinct personalities. You used wonderfully strong words, "splinter", "smite", "chill" and so on, lovely, lovely, descriptions, and I especially enjoyed the formatting: it was really well structured and I'd say it's the best poem I've read in AGES!
Narq.
P.S. don't forget to point me to another story of yours~ :)