3/20/2008 c1 8Written
if you want to make lines 'stick' together to make stanzas, press shift and enter at the same time instead of just enter, when you're previewing the document on fictionpress's preview/edit thingy.

as for the poem itself, it's very pretty. the last line has a lot of satisfaction to it! well done.

I saw in your bio that you have a story out that's a retelling of cinderella... but I don't see it! am I just being dumb? I would love to read it :)