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6/30/2015 c1 7ShadowMere28
Wow, that was really good! Yeah, that was great!
7/27/2003 c1 12IHJ
Formatting...I know this was published in 2001, but I think even then it was possible to put stories in chapters, right? This is quite too long for one read and annoying if you want to review only part of the story (if u don't have time to finish) since you can leave only one review per chapter.

I very much doubt a seven-years old girl would say “I just want to hit a few more houses then head

home.” HIT a few more houses. Nuh uh. That's not child slang.

They're only nine-years old! How can Todd and Gerry have crushes on a high schoolers! *wailing at loss of innocence*

I'm sorry. I had to stop after Chapter 3. Maybe I'll be able to finish reviewing under anonymous name or a friend's account.
11/24/2002 c1 A Witch
Well I actually I am a witch (well, almost) and I can tell you that we are not evil, we do not kidnap people.

You, and other people like you who spread rumours about witches are the evil ones. Do you know anything about Witchcraft? Obviously not.

I am not even going to talk about this.

Pathetic story, by the way. Good writing techniques but pathetic plots indicating strange fetishes.
11/11/2002 c1 Tinania
first of all, good story. very creative use of witches. good descriptions!

second of all, you are obsessed with underwear, people wetting their pants, and varying types of violence. this is not a story for kids that still have their sanity.

but overall, this was a good story. keep writing!
10/27/2002 c1 A Pair of Witches
to whom it may concern:

your story sucks but we had alot of fun making fun of it. And Todd, Larry, and Rachel all belong in padded cells. We wanted to know if you have bladder problems and a strange fixation with underwear
10/27/2002 c1 A Pair of Witches
to whom it may concern:

your story sucks but we had alot of fun making fun of it. And Todd, Larry, and Rachel all belong in padded cells. We wanted to know if you have bladder problems and a strange fixation with underwear
10/27/2002 c1 A Pair of Witches
to whom it may concern:

your story sucks but we had alot of fun making fun of it. And Todd, Larry, and Rachel all belong in padded cells. We wanted to know if you have bladder problems and a strange fixation with underwear
5/15/2002 c1 Spooky Fyre
I'd start bitching about how witch's don't get consumed by fire when they die or whatever and that most witch's love children and would never hurt one (as with all life) but...it's a story. And sterotypical evil 'witch's' make good story lines if you're so inclined. So no bitching out from me today. ^_^

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