for Bouquet10/26/2011 c1 
8Dark Blue Lover
I'd take out the word "though", but other than that, great piece! I don't find it disgusting at all... captures how I feel recently when someone offers me flowers -.- (not that that happens too often but it did *sighs*)
Anyway, I love the brevity and simplicity in this. Good job :)
8Dark Blue LoverI'd take out the word "though", but other than that, great piece! I don't find it disgusting at all... captures how I feel recently when someone offers me flowers -.- (not that that happens too often but it did *sighs*)
Anyway, I love the brevity and simplicity in this. Good job :)
8/14/2009 c1 CCPerson
I love it, with the whole nature thing.
I love it, with the whole nature thing.
9/20/2008 c1 14kit feral
I can never say this much in so few lines.
I bow down to you- you don't waste a word.
14kit feralI can never say this much in so few lines.
I bow down to you- you don't waste a word.
8/14/2008 c1 4Anesther
For something disgusting, it was very well written.
Nice, short, and a bit bitter. Doesn't need much else.
4AnestherFor something disgusting, it was very well written.
Nice, short, and a bit bitter. Doesn't need much else.
2/26/2008 c1 1FromMyBackyard
aww... that's so nice.
I love Magnolias; the best trees, really.
"stealing from nature" - now that brings on a different perspective on the "let's pick a flower" impulse. makes you pause. really good insight into another person, don't you think?
1FromMyBackyardaww... that's so nice.
I love Magnolias; the best trees, really.
"stealing from nature" - now that brings on a different perspective on the "let's pick a flower" impulse. makes you pause. really good insight into another person, don't you think?
12/31/2007 c1 82Doxology
again. this is absolutley wonderful. and i must say, the author's note is great as well :)
peace and love
~ h.p. warble
p.s. yet another favorite...
82Doxologyagain. this is absolutley wonderful. and i must say, the author's note is great as well :)
peace and love
~ h.p. warble
p.s. yet another favorite...
12/3/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Very interesting theme. You could be more consice with the words "though,/because"; perhaps you could get rid of them. This poem is very unique and the ending, which was not at all what I expected, was like a breath of fresh air-fresh point of view.
65NemonusVery interesting theme. You could be more consice with the words "though,/because"; perhaps you could get rid of them. This poem is very unique and the ending, which was not at all what I expected, was like a breath of fresh air-fresh point of view.
11/30/2007 c1 13gigglebug
wow. fantastic viewpoint with that one.
I can't think of anyone I know (personally, at least) that would think about someone stealing from nature right off the bat. fabulous!
thanks for R&R-ing my haiku!
13gigglebugwow. fantastic viewpoint with that one.
I can't think of anyone I know (personally, at least) that would think about someone stealing from nature right off the bat. fabulous!
thanks for R&R-ing my haiku!
11/23/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Aww, that's so sad. Great poem. Very original. Nice work. :)
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrAww, that's so sad. Great poem. Very original. Nice work. :)
~Twilight Starr~