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10/26/2011 c1 8Dark Blue Lover
I'd take out the word "though", but other than that, great piece! I don't find it disgusting at all... captures how I feel recently when someone offers me flowers -.- (not that that happens too often but it did *sighs*)

Anyway, I love the brevity and simplicity in this. Good job :)
8/14/2009 c1 CCPerson
I love it, with the whole nature thing.
5/10/2009 c1 145young and the reckless
i love the headstrong attitude and the powerful message.
9/20/2008 c1 14kit feral
I can never say this much in so few lines.

I bow down to you- you don't waste a word.
8/14/2008 c1 4Anesther
For something disgusting, it was very well written.

Nice, short, and a bit bitter. Doesn't need much else.
2/26/2008 c1 1FromMyBackyard
aww... that's so nice.

I love Magnolias; the best trees, really.

"stealing from nature" - now that brings on a different perspective on the "let's pick a flower" impulse. makes you pause. really good insight into another person, don't you think?
1/2/2008 c1 50tonight we storm
god you're good.
12/31/2007 c1 82Doxology
again. this is absolutley wonderful. and i must say, the author's note is great as well :)

peace and love

~ h.p. warble

p.s. yet another favorite...
12/22/2007 c1 265Autumn Lace
I liked this poem too.

12/3/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Very interesting theme. You could be more consice with the words "though,/because"; perhaps you could get rid of them. This poem is very unique and the ending, which was not at all what I expected, was like a breath of fresh air-fresh point of view.
11/30/2007 c1 13gigglebug
wow. fantastic viewpoint with that one.

I can't think of anyone I know (personally, at least) that would think about someone stealing from nature right off the bat. fabulous!

thanks for R&R-ing my haiku!
11/23/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Aww, that's so sad. Great poem. Very original. Nice work. :)

~Twilight Starr~
11/13/2007 c1 1Ecomsay
that was beautiful
11/11/2007 c1 18little boy on her bike
wow, i just love that last line. brilliant...
11/11/2007 c1 30Raiyune
I don't think it's disgusting... Heh. I think there's something about your writing... it's so simple and yet... I find it very moving... I liked this one.
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