for The Dance in the Rain11/16/2007 c1 Qzie
That was beautiful. It has this mystical quality, I guess you could call it, and for such a short piece, it kind of makes you stare at it in wonder. It was so perfectly worded and... I dunno, it was magnificent. Sorry this is such a short review, but I don't have much time... Favorites! You know, as soon as I log in... ^^'' -Qzie
That was beautiful. It has this mystical quality, I guess you could call it, and for such a short piece, it kind of makes you stare at it in wonder. It was so perfectly worded and... I dunno, it was magnificent. Sorry this is such a short review, but I don't have much time... Favorites! You know, as soon as I log in... ^^'' -Qzie
10/26/2007 c1 
49The Reverse Edge Blade
This was a great work! I liked how you used the rain as a metaphore to the feeling one gets when in love, with only one thing that matters, in this case, heard. I liked how you chose your words to describe their feelings and the idea of the dance.
Keep at it and write more!
I'll continue to read from you!
The Reverse Edge Blade
49The Reverse Edge BladeThis was a great work! I liked how you used the rain as a metaphore to the feeling one gets when in love, with only one thing that matters, in this case, heard. I liked how you chose your words to describe their feelings and the idea of the dance.
Keep at it and write more!
I'll continue to read from you!
The Reverse Edge Blade
10/22/2007 c1 25the face in the window
This is so pretty. You're really good at this style of writing. Beautiful job (AND WRITE MORE)!
Rowan.
25the face in the windowThis is so pretty. You're really good at this style of writing. Beautiful job (AND WRITE MORE)!
Rowan.
10/20/2007 c1 5The Grammar Nazi
Wow. Just wow. Romance is my least favorite genre of literature, but this hardly even compares to the rest. It's like a poem, and a very beautiful one at that. I love the language. I love the figurisms. And most of all, I love the end. It's such a brilliantly simple idea, and the way you put it together is magical.
I am really impressed with your work; you're a good author who is definitely a great author in the making, if you pursue it. God job. =D
5The Grammar NaziWow. Just wow. Romance is my least favorite genre of literature, but this hardly even compares to the rest. It's like a poem, and a very beautiful one at that. I love the language. I love the figurisms. And most of all, I love the end. It's such a brilliantly simple idea, and the way you put it together is magical.
I am really impressed with your work; you're a good author who is definitely a great author in the making, if you pursue it. God job. =D