for Blood Red Roses10/24/2014 c11 SundayMorning73
I'm not sure if this chapter is switched with the last one but the previous chapter, Althea mentions taking care of herself and being able to wander about the mansion and alone when Damien refers to Charley attacking her, which hadn't happened yet. Just figured I'd point that out.
I'm not sure if this chapter is switched with the last one but the previous chapter, Althea mentions taking care of herself and being able to wander about the mansion and alone when Damien refers to Charley attacking her, which hadn't happened yet. Just figured I'd point that out.
4/21/2013 c11 bettyboop1124
I read that you are re-posting. I hope that means there is more to come. I was enjoying this very much. Also, on your profile I saw that you have a third book, Blood Sweat and Tears, where is the second?
I read that you are re-posting. I hope that means there is more to come. I was enjoying this very much. Also, on your profile I saw that you have a third book, Blood Sweat and Tears, where is the second?
10/5/2011 c1 Random1
the story line is great but there r just too many typos to read and make sense of which really distracts from the story. running it through spellcheck on word should get rid of most of the spelling errors and getting a beta should fix the grammar mistakes. at present it is just too time consuming to interpret what your saying even though it is a good story.
Regards and hoping for a great final copy
the story line is great but there r just too many typos to read and make sense of which really distracts from the story. running it through spellcheck on word should get rid of most of the spelling errors and getting a beta should fix the grammar mistakes. at present it is just too time consuming to interpret what your saying even though it is a good story.
Regards and hoping for a great final copy
7/27/2011 c1 Ellybeth
Your story seemed interesting but you have may too many grammatical errors to try and read through.
Your story seemed interesting but you have may too many grammatical errors to try and read through.
9/14/2010 c25 
9Kinjirareta Ai
i love this story! It is absolutely amazing! You are a fantastic writer, and i hope to be able to buy yuor book one day! good luck on the publishing!
9Kinjirareta Aii love this story! It is absolutely amazing! You are a fantastic writer, and i hope to be able to buy yuor book one day! good luck on the publishing!
7/25/2010 c25 1failwithpride
i strongly suggest correcting the many spelling errors in this story.
it gets really annoying when you read this and there are heaps of mistakes.
1failwithpridei strongly suggest correcting the many spelling errors in this story.
it gets really annoying when you read this and there are heaps of mistakes.
5/27/2010 c4 2LittleMissSmiles
The story is great but you really really really need to fix your spelling.
The spelling mistakes are really obviuos and degreade what could be a magnificent story.
Overall I loved it :))
2LittleMissSmilesThe story is great but you really really really need to fix your spelling.
The spelling mistakes are really obviuos and degreade what could be a magnificent story.
Overall I loved it :))
5/26/2010 c27 blackrule
is there any way for us to read the edited version? I would love to see what's changed! :D
is there any way for us to read the edited version? I would love to see what's changed! :D
3/30/2010 c13 anonymous
LOVE the story, only setback is the bad grammar.
(:
LOVE the story, only setback is the bad grammar.
(:
3/25/2010 c14 Bubbles1357
Pretty good story, but did your beta die? You have done pretty well on grammar, but your spelling needs a lot of work. You might run it through Word, proof read it, then re-post. Other than the spelling and some general typos, you're doing pretty well though. :)
Pretty good story, but did your beta die? You have done pretty well on grammar, but your spelling needs a lot of work. You might run it through Word, proof read it, then re-post. Other than the spelling and some general typos, you're doing pretty well though. :)