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11/26/2007 c1 1Gemma Lovell
Ooh, I really like this! Sorry it took me so long to review, by the way. I like how you used informal language. Your rhyme scheme reminded me a bit of that poem "Macavity the Mystery Cat" by T.S. Elliot, which is pretty cool. Your English is still doing really well. Great job!

Love, Gemma
11/3/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Great poem. It was sort of funny even though these days it's kind of true.

~Twilight Starr~
10/27/2007 c1 31i am valentine
i liked this, and you rhyme really well

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