for Legalised Robbery11/26/2007 c1 
1Gemma Lovell
Ooh, I really like this! Sorry it took me so long to review, by the way. I like how you used informal language. Your rhyme scheme reminded me a bit of that poem "Macavity the Mystery Cat" by T.S. Elliot, which is pretty cool. Your English is still doing really well. Great job!
Love, Gemma
1Gemma LovellOoh, I really like this! Sorry it took me so long to review, by the way. I like how you used informal language. Your rhyme scheme reminded me a bit of that poem "Macavity the Mystery Cat" by T.S. Elliot, which is pretty cool. Your English is still doing really well. Great job!
Love, Gemma
11/3/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Great poem. It was sort of funny even though these days it's kind of true.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrGreat poem. It was sort of funny even though these days it's kind of true.
~Twilight Starr~