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2/27/2009 c1 1Phoenix Octavia Bright
(Am reviewing everyone who ever reviewed my cinderella story)

I like the potential of the story. I think that they found each other way to easily. I really liked the beginning, but not the rest of the story per se. I think you rushed into finding everyone now, and not taking the time to find them, in my opinion.

But am interested to see how the story continues.

10/22/2007 c1 4MidnyghtVampyrezz
My dad's going to the land of Dorthy 2morrow...

Freaking awesome! i love it, of course!

Great job Jay!

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