2/27/2009 c1 1Phoenix Octavia Bright
(Am reviewing everyone who ever reviewed my cinderella story)

I like the potential of the story. I think that they found each other way to easily. I really liked the beginning, but not the rest of the story per se. I think you rushed into finding everyone now, and not taking the time to find them, in my opinion.

But am interested to see how the story continues.

PB