for Dreams10/23/2007 c1 flies.like.decay
Well, I never thought of dreams as being that way. It's probably because I'm usually submersed in a nightmare.
You know, if you'ld like to remove double spacing, you can hit backspace+shift at the beginning of each line. Then you could divide your poems into stanzas. It would make everything look a whole lot nicer.
Well, I never thought of dreams as being that way. It's probably because I'm usually submersed in a nightmare.
You know, if you'ld like to remove double spacing, you can hit backspace+shift at the beginning of each line. Then you could divide your poems into stanzas. It would make everything look a whole lot nicer.
10/22/2007 c1 sylvia's syndrome
Nice work. This poem has a sort of “sweet and innocent” feel that I don’t see too often… it’s not really the popular style I guess, with all the modern themes of disillusionment. It was a refreshing read. Keep writing!
Nice work. This poem has a sort of “sweet and innocent” feel that I don’t see too often… it’s not really the popular style I guess, with all the modern themes of disillusionment. It was a refreshing read. Keep writing!