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12/8/2007 c1 59C.H. Bashaw
"the fingers of the palace spires/reach towards the heavens,/not grasping, but letting go." Interesting... the closer one is physically to God, the farther they are spiritually? Or perhaps you intend this to be an attack on greed?
10/25/2007 c1 10Robert T. Allen
I like it because it makes me think. Although blank verse, is always a more difficult kind of poetry since its harder to grasp the reader, I think you have good ideas, and good imagery, but when I hear it, there isn't a lot of things going on in my head, maybe you should put more metaphors and imagery into it.

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