for L'adieu à mon ami2/28/2008 c6 
9aspirer
wow. these are amazing. and i'm not a big fan of poetry, so thats a huge compliment. every one of them was so resonant without being overly cliched and you did some wonderful things with rhyme. it sucks that the inspiration was so painful :(
9aspirerwow. these are amazing. and i'm not a big fan of poetry, so thats a huge compliment. every one of them was so resonant without being overly cliched and you did some wonderful things with rhyme. it sucks that the inspiration was so painful :(
1/19/2008 c2 32Dreaming Chica
Such a feeling of loss and saddness. You style of the poem added to the emotion that was already there. Beautifully written, and the detail made it esay to relate to. To feel that pain. I'm so sorry for the loss fo your friend. :(
Beautiful poem, keep writing!
♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
32Dreaming ChicaSuch a feeling of loss and saddness. You style of the poem added to the emotion that was already there. Beautifully written, and the detail made it esay to relate to. To feel that pain. I'm so sorry for the loss fo your friend. :(
Beautiful poem, keep writing!
♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
10/29/2007 c1 7silvercana
this is very touching. I can feel your pain. Actually i just lost a very dear friend and what you just wrote is what is happening t me. And I hope to read more of your works
7silvercanathis is very touching. I can feel your pain. Actually i just lost a very dear friend and what you just wrote is what is happening t me. And I hope to read more of your works
10/24/2007 c1 DetachedAngel777
I love this. I want to ask for you a question. You don't have to say yes or anything. But i was wondering if you could write me a poem or help me write one for a project i will credit you if you do. If you are interested or if anyone is interested message me.
I love this. I want to ask for you a question. You don't have to say yes or anything. But i was wondering if you could write me a poem or help me write one for a project i will credit you if you do. If you are interested or if anyone is interested message me.
10/24/2007 c1 6Ginne
This is truly touching. It really captures the feelings of loss. I commend you on your ability to capture these emotions with words. If you are a songwriter, these would make perfect lyrics.
6GinneThis is truly touching. It really captures the feelings of loss. I commend you on your ability to capture these emotions with words. If you are a songwriter, these would make perfect lyrics.
10/23/2007 c1 7Queai Kumosse
Hmm...I don't know if I've ever read your poetry! Anyway, the beginning of this I was kind of skeptical of, but as you wrote out the explanation for each thing, I quite liked it. I'm sure the "I can't"s at the beginning were intentional, but it would have been cool if you had switched words there. Also, the "because" explanations got a wee bit tiring. I like the flow, rhythm, and the classy rhymes of this though. I liked your word choice, too! Simple yet delicate...if you catch my drift. :P Anyway, it'd be interesting to read more poetry sometime!
7Queai KumosseHmm...I don't know if I've ever read your poetry! Anyway, the beginning of this I was kind of skeptical of, but as you wrote out the explanation for each thing, I quite liked it. I'm sure the "I can't"s at the beginning were intentional, but it would have been cool if you had switched words there. Also, the "because" explanations got a wee bit tiring. I like the flow, rhythm, and the classy rhymes of this though. I liked your word choice, too! Simple yet delicate...if you catch my drift. :P Anyway, it'd be interesting to read more poetry sometime!