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9/1/2011 c4 Islaa
This story looks to be good. You should update
8/24/2008 c4 1Winter92
I hope he finds someone new
1/17/2008 c4 Bibi.Love
more more more
1/5/2008 c4 1Valkyre
DANG
10/29/2007 c4 3Kadekksys
this was a good chapter, but the transition from the last one to this was kind of choppy. The end of the last chapter made it seem like they were going to try to work it out, and then all of a sudden we're a few years into the future and they're divorced. Also, I wish your chapters were longer. You have so much to work with and develop. I would love to have more to read!
10/28/2007 c4 OoohLookACat
ooh well that did get a tad bit more interesting

can't wait for more

izzie
10/28/2007 c3 4Moonlit Promise
Wow, violent sex. @.@ I wanna see what happens with Audrey and James. o.o

So, update soon.
10/25/2007 c3 OoohLookACat
interesting story

the plot line is interesting

can't wait for more

izzie
10/25/2007 c3 2curlyk03
interesting.

kind of lost, but i suppose you'll clarify.

update soon.
10/24/2007 c3 1Glossy Girl
Wow, intense! Update soon! Sex is better than violence, I suppose. Even though that's like rough sex, lol. Good story! Continue! ^_^
10/24/2007 c2 3Kadekksys
love it! sorry, that's all I've got cause I'm late for class! ah! cant wait for more, though!
10/24/2007 c2 Uninvited
The first chapter was so cute. Why did James and Audrey split up in the first place?
10/23/2007 c1 Kadekksys
aw, i like it. its so sweet. the age difference in kinda creepy- she's so young- but other than that, i liked it.

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