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12/25/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Very interesting, very poetic with the not-quite repeition and the confidant, dallying voice. The third and second lines from the end didn't quite keep the rhythm, and try using ALT 130 on your keyboard to get the é in 'lovéd' (instead of "love-ed". Good work.

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