for Now and Forever Yours3/5/2010 c14 Seshirya
Poor Tory and Jay every time things start to work out they get more shit thrown their way. I love reading this story, though i kinda like it in Jay's view better, he adds lots of humorus thoughts to go along with everything that happens. He's just too cute some times :)
Poor Tory and Jay every time things start to work out they get more shit thrown their way. I love reading this story, though i kinda like it in Jay's view better, he adds lots of humorus thoughts to go along with everything that happens. He's just too cute some times :)
1/30/2010 c14 awesome-lobes-you
i LOVE your stories, (especially this one) please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next.
Please!-_- (i'm weird)
^.^
i LOVE your stories, (especially this one) please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next.
Please!-_- (i'm weird)
^.^
1/3/2010 c1 Aradia Cloud
I so love this series. Jayden is so blunt. lol. You MUST continue this story.
I so love this series. Jayden is so blunt. lol. You MUST continue this story.
11/14/2009 c14 Cupcake-of-Evil
The new chapters really had my heart pounding! I actually got really nervous about the whole Tyler thing and then the car crash! I also hope Nathaniel is alright...
You don't know how happy I was when I saw that you updated!
P.S.
What did you mean on the part before chapter 12 about moving it/finishing somewhere else? If you are then what was the site for it did not show? I would really love to read the updates!
The new chapters really had my heart pounding! I actually got really nervous about the whole Tyler thing and then the car crash! I also hope Nathaniel is alright...
You don't know how happy I was when I saw that you updated!
P.S.
What did you mean on the part before chapter 12 about moving it/finishing somewhere else? If you are then what was the site for it did not show? I would really love to read the updates!
11/13/2009 c9 Aradia Cloud
What? Holy hell! Didn't see this one coming. Man Eternally; you keep me on the edge of my seat.
What? Holy hell! Didn't see this one coming. Man Eternally; you keep me on the edge of my seat.
11/13/2009 c8 Aradia Cloud
Oh... very interesting. LOL I just KNEW that Jay or Tory was gonna get everything. This is just awesome man.
Oh... very interesting. LOL I just KNEW that Jay or Tory was gonna get everything. This is just awesome man.
11/13/2009 c6 Aradia Cloud
Stupid old effin geezer. Where the hell does he get off hitting Jayden in the ankle with a golf club?
Stupid old effin geezer. Where the hell does he get off hitting Jayden in the ankle with a golf club?
11/5/2009 c14 
3portabellaprincess
This story is awesome!:D
I just reread the first story yesterday.
I love the twist and turns and stuff.
I like how these chapters are longer.
Keep it up! ^_^
In both stories you posted a note but the website wasn't included of where you would be posting your stories. Is that the website on your profile/bio page?
3portabellaprincessThis story is awesome!:D
I just reread the first story yesterday.
I love the twist and turns and stuff.
I like how these chapters are longer.
Keep it up! ^_^
In both stories you posted a note but the website wasn't included of where you would be posting your stories. Is that the website on your profile/bio page?
11/5/2009 c13 1Cassidy Valentin
Just finished reading the chapters in FP and in webook. You really pulled some strings in the story! Now Jayden and Tory are now back to being brothers. [but still doesn't change some facts, so good-good] And it's going great. I wonder who's Shane's working with. [Hope it's not Nate]. Now I really start wondering who's telling the truth.
Looking forward to the update! thanks!
1Cassidy ValentinJust finished reading the chapters in FP and in webook. You really pulled some strings in the story! Now Jayden and Tory are now back to being brothers. [but still doesn't change some facts, so good-good] And it's going great. I wonder who's Shane's working with. [Hope it's not Nate]. Now I really start wondering who's telling the truth.
Looking forward to the update! thanks!
11/4/2009 c14 HazeleyedHoney
The last two chapters were totally awesome! I like having Tory's POV for awhile. Its a nice change. On Chapter 12 you mention a website where you will be posting your work but it didn't show up on the page. Could you send it to me in a message or repost it with spaces in between each letter so ficpress will allow it to post?
The last two chapters were totally awesome! I like having Tory's POV for awhile. Its a nice change. On Chapter 12 you mention a website where you will be posting your work but it didn't show up on the page. Could you send it to me in a message or repost it with spaces in between each letter so ficpress will allow it to post?
11/4/2009 c14 Cassidy Valentin
Hi! I need a little help, I'm getting confused with the story. Let me state/ask things from the chapter 13: New Extremes:
The Caroline-Curtis-Helena affair is in this sequence. Caroline & Curtis AND Helena & Shane - Caroline & Shane AND Helena & Curtis - then went back to the first one sequence again?
Which kid does Caroline found out that Helena was having and making her want Curtis back?
And what does Tory mean when he talked to Curtis in the hospital that Jayden was his son with her? Jayden is his son with Helena?
Tory and Nate are brothers which make their parents Helena and Shane. And makes Jayden his cousin. Is that right?
I'm not done reading the whole chapter because I'm getting so confused. Thanks!
Hi! I need a little help, I'm getting confused with the story. Let me state/ask things from the chapter 13: New Extremes:
The Caroline-Curtis-Helena affair is in this sequence. Caroline & Curtis AND Helena & Shane - Caroline & Shane AND Helena & Curtis - then went back to the first one sequence again?
Which kid does Caroline found out that Helena was having and making her want Curtis back?
And what does Tory mean when he talked to Curtis in the hospital that Jayden was his son with her? Jayden is his son with Helena?
Tory and Nate are brothers which make their parents Helena and Shane. And makes Jayden his cousin. Is that right?
I'm not done reading the whole chapter because I'm getting so confused. Thanks!
11/1/2009 c12 Kurai Suki
You can't read the website. All it says is '. com' Please give me the rest of it. I wanna keep reading your story!
You can't read the website. All it says is '. com' Please give me the rest of it. I wanna keep reading your story!