for Now and Forever Yours2/5/2009 c8 AlastrinaMeadow
WHAT? This story has thrown me for a loop, a million times over. Is there seriously going to be a manga about this? Anyway, UPDATE SOON!
WHAT? This story has thrown me for a loop, a million times over. Is there seriously going to be a manga about this? Anyway, UPDATE SOON!
2/1/2009 c8 AlexionMichaelis
ZOMIGOD! Insanely awsome! Awsome job on the chapter! Cant wait till the next one! =)
ZOMIGOD! Insanely awsome! Awsome job on the chapter! Cant wait till the next one! =)
1/31/2009 c8 
3Max-Ashworth
That literally is the longest chapter I have ever read on fictionpress. Or anywhere, actually.
Since so much happened in this I obviously can't talk about EVERYTHING I felt BUT:
HE PUT ON A TOKIO HOTEL SHIRT.
FOR THAT, YOU ARE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR EVER.
I thought I was the only person who knew about them on fictionpress. I haven't heard anyone else talk about them. They're my favorite band EVER. (I saw the concert in Sayreville, NJ in August :D) So yeah, when Jayden said he put on a TH shirt I re-read it 3 times to make sure I wasn't imagining it and then grinned and squealed.
When Paris walked in on them in the bath I was like, "Yaoi fangirls shall take over the world!"
When Jayden inherited everything my face must've been hilarious. And then what'shisface shows up and I go, "Oh shit. Jay was right the whole time. This is bad.
Well, my cat is laying on my hands so I can't effectively type anymore.
Until next time,
~AftG
3Max-AshworthThat literally is the longest chapter I have ever read on fictionpress. Or anywhere, actually.
Since so much happened in this I obviously can't talk about EVERYTHING I felt BUT:
HE PUT ON A TOKIO HOTEL SHIRT.
FOR THAT, YOU ARE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR EVER.
I thought I was the only person who knew about them on fictionpress. I haven't heard anyone else talk about them. They're my favorite band EVER. (I saw the concert in Sayreville, NJ in August :D) So yeah, when Jayden said he put on a TH shirt I re-read it 3 times to make sure I wasn't imagining it and then grinned and squealed.
When Paris walked in on them in the bath I was like, "Yaoi fangirls shall take over the world!"
When Jayden inherited everything my face must've been hilarious. And then what'shisface shows up and I go, "Oh shit. Jay was right the whole time. This is bad.
Well, my cat is laying on my hands so I can't effectively type anymore.
Until next time,
~AftG
1/30/2009 c8 HazeleyedHoney
This really wouldn't be your story if Jayden's life wasn't in danger now would it? lol There is A LOT of incest in this Jayden's world...between Jayden/Tory, Skylar/Skylar's dad, Adeline/Quin. lol People have been really accepting of it so far. I thought for sure Jayden and Tory would have to move to another country or something and Tory is famous. Once word got out that he's gay and having a relationship with his younger brother...well the press wouldn't just let that sh*t go. And I'm sure there would be Church goers harassing them. I love this story and your chapter are always really long and worth the wait. I can't wait for the next one! Update as soon as you can.
This really wouldn't be your story if Jayden's life wasn't in danger now would it? lol There is A LOT of incest in this Jayden's world...between Jayden/Tory, Skylar/Skylar's dad, Adeline/Quin. lol People have been really accepting of it so far. I thought for sure Jayden and Tory would have to move to another country or something and Tory is famous. Once word got out that he's gay and having a relationship with his younger brother...well the press wouldn't just let that sh*t go. And I'm sure there would be Church goers harassing them. I love this story and your chapter are always really long and worth the wait. I can't wait for the next one! Update as soon as you can.
1/30/2009 c8 4efphrim
OMG! Such a shocker! What doesn't Jayden know? Why did he get his grandfather's fortune? How did Drew find him? Who the hell names their kid Jory? Questions that must be answered next time, yes? Yes! Can barely wait for your next update! Make all your fans proud!
4efphrimOMG! Such a shocker! What doesn't Jayden know? Why did he get his grandfather's fortune? How did Drew find him? Who the hell names their kid Jory? Questions that must be answered next time, yes? Yes! Can barely wait for your next update! Make all your fans proud!
1/29/2009 c8 Haley Hardcore
amazing chapter alot of things were found out and dude omgsies cant wait till the next chapter
amazing chapter alot of things were found out and dude omgsies cant wait till the next chapter
1/16/2009 c7 Aniytlia
Omg, who the heck is this Nathaniel guy? He just shows up and says he's their mom's stepbrother . . .
And their grandpa is murdered? What the Hell? I don't think Tory and Jayden are too bummed about it though
And I'm so happy that there's a sequel! Yay!
:) Aniytlia
Omg, who the heck is this Nathaniel guy? He just shows up and says he's their mom's stepbrother . . .
And their grandpa is murdered? What the Hell? I don't think Tory and Jayden are too bummed about it though
And I'm so happy that there's a sequel! Yay!
:) Aniytlia
12/6/2008 c7 Language Lover
I have to say, you're story is really amazing.
You have a really good plotline and amazingly interesting characters.
But I have to say, there are a lot of spelling mistakes. In this one and in the first one. There are also some grammar mistakes in them. I would suggest you proof-read or have a friend proof-read it. Other people notice mistakes better than the one who wrote the story.
Well then, I can't wait until you update. I love this story.
P.S. I really love languages, so I'm a bit picky when it comes to grammar and spelling.
I have to say, you're story is really amazing.
You have a really good plotline and amazingly interesting characters.
But I have to say, there are a lot of spelling mistakes. In this one and in the first one. There are also some grammar mistakes in them. I would suggest you proof-read or have a friend proof-read it. Other people notice mistakes better than the one who wrote the story.
Well then, I can't wait until you update. I love this story.
P.S. I really love languages, so I'm a bit picky when it comes to grammar and spelling.
9/11/2008 c7 Haley Hardcore
awesome story so far and yay their getting married and dude cant wait 2 find out who murdered thei granddad
awesome story so far and yay their getting married and dude cant wait 2 find out who murdered thei granddad