for wind a blow5/15/2008 c1 WormsofCharacter
Oh, my! I love this one, too. It speaks of thoughts in the back of your mind, things seen out of the corner of your eye. what do you really want it to be?
Oh, my! I love this one, too. It speaks of thoughts in the back of your mind, things seen out of the corner of your eye. what do you really want it to be?
10/28/2007 c1 
56felicia13
Thanks, Bread. I hope you meant that sarcastically, because rhyme irritates me like no other, but mostly when it's done badly. People who can do it well are like the gods of rhythm. This is good rhyme. Well written, Bread!
I love how it starts whimsically and then, still sounds whimsy, moves onto things that go bump in the night.
The last line is the best. I LOVE THE TITLE OF THIS POEM; it makes me happy in my soul.
All-in-all, I enjoyed this. And I enjoyed getting mentioned in the A/N. ^^
Felicia.
56felicia13Thanks, Bread. I hope you meant that sarcastically, because rhyme irritates me like no other, but mostly when it's done badly. People who can do it well are like the gods of rhythm. This is good rhyme. Well written, Bread!
I love how it starts whimsically and then, still sounds whimsy, moves onto things that go bump in the night.
The last line is the best. I LOVE THE TITLE OF THIS POEM; it makes me happy in my soul.
All-in-all, I enjoyed this. And I enjoyed getting mentioned in the A/N. ^^
Felicia.
10/25/2007 c1 33WyrdWolf
Ah, cool, Bread. I like it overall-a story in poetic form; the ending is wonderful. Sometimes the meter was off, but oh, well, worst things have happened (like math homework).
Love this one.
Wolfie
33WyrdWolfAh, cool, Bread. I like it overall-a story in poetic form; the ending is wonderful. Sometimes the meter was off, but oh, well, worst things have happened (like math homework).
Love this one.
Wolfie
10/24/2007 c1 22Alice Faraday
This is a good poem. I like the topic...I've thought the same thing many a time. Good job with punctuation, not many poets can figure out how to make it work in their poems or even bother useing it, I know I don't. But good job, a very enthusiastic poem. One could preseume that you have a lot of energy.
+MOUSE
22Alice FaradayThis is a good poem. I like the topic...I've thought the same thing many a time. Good job with punctuation, not many poets can figure out how to make it work in their poems or even bother useing it, I know I don't. But good job, a very enthusiastic poem. One could preseume that you have a lot of energy.
+MOUSE