for Opposite Ends of The Spectrum7/1/2012 c15 Guest
I can't believe how good this is. I almost never review anything in fictionpress and you've changed it. The characters are so real I feel them living the scenes in front of me. The relationship between the characters have been sustained well throughout the story. The love-hate isn't like any shallow "let's pretend to hate each other but end up falling in love quickly" kind of thing that I see a lot here. It's full of emotion, just the right pacing, and every reaction seems well thought-of. Not sure if you actually did, but you're practically brimming with talent. Actually stopped me from sleeping, which is incredible considering how much I love sleep. Onwards to chapter 30 for me.
I can't believe how good this is. I almost never review anything in fictionpress and you've changed it. The characters are so real I feel them living the scenes in front of me. The relationship between the characters have been sustained well throughout the story. The love-hate isn't like any shallow "let's pretend to hate each other but end up falling in love quickly" kind of thing that I see a lot here. It's full of emotion, just the right pacing, and every reaction seems well thought-of. Not sure if you actually did, but you're practically brimming with talent. Actually stopped me from sleeping, which is incredible considering how much I love sleep. Onwards to chapter 30 for me.
6/28/2012 c30 Guest
I really don't have to say that your story was awesome, no need to boost an ego! It really was a story worth reading. The fact you made, dare I say, "cliché" of 'nerd/recluse falls for jock/rich guy' into a story that had depth, emotion, and a background; is amazing! The only criticism I can give is to keep track of those details. I'm not sure if I'm being anal, but little things can deter a reader for just a split second. Keep up the good work!
I really don't have to say that your story was awesome, no need to boost an ego! It really was a story worth reading. The fact you made, dare I say, "cliché" of 'nerd/recluse falls for jock/rich guy' into a story that had depth, emotion, and a background; is amazing! The only criticism I can give is to keep track of those details. I'm not sure if I'm being anal, but little things can deter a reader for just a split second. Keep up the good work!
6/26/2012 c30 ForgottenHope
So well written. The pace and development of the story left little to be desired. I don't think you went too slow at all. I'm very much impressed that you have the discipline and patience to not rush into the romance. Not many writers on here can do that. I will definitely be looking out for your other literary works.
So well written. The pace and development of the story left little to be desired. I don't think you went too slow at all. I'm very much impressed that you have the discipline and patience to not rush into the romance. Not many writers on here can do that. I will definitely be looking out for your other literary works.
6/25/2012 c30 
1TheKiralee
This story was so goddamn amazing, and the amount of times I ranted about it on twitter is amazing too so FUCK. This is the second story I've read on fictionpress, b/c I'm a fanfiction person, and I usually read all my ammature fiction stories on Wattpad. BUTYEAH ohmygod marry me please, you amazing author xD
1TheKiraleeThis story was so goddamn amazing, and the amount of times I ranted about it on twitter is amazing too so FUCK. This is the second story I've read on fictionpress, b/c I'm a fanfiction person, and I usually read all my ammature fiction stories on Wattpad. BUTYEAH ohmygod marry me please, you amazing author xD
6/25/2012 c29 TheKiralee
OhmygodohmygodohmygodTEEHEE
SO cute hahaha I'm in the school library, giggling like a mad idiot xDDD
OhmygodohmygodohmygodTEEHEE
SO cute hahaha I'm in the school library, giggling like a mad idiot xDDD
6/24/2012 c22 TheKiralee
Oh man, this has got to be some of the most cliched romance ever... AND I LOVE IT! SQUEEEE! xD
And what? Chris? NOOOOOOOoooooooo... *cries*
Oh man, this has got to be some of the most cliched romance ever... AND I LOVE IT! SQUEEEE! xD
And what? Chris? NOOOOOOOoooooooo... *cries*
6/24/2012 c8 1TheKiralee
Noo... I liked Chris D: Does that mean he's out of the picture now, or? Eh, I guess I'll find out xD
Love this story :D
1TheKiraleeNoo... I liked Chris D: Does that mean he's out of the picture now, or? Eh, I guess I'll find out xD
Love this story :D
6/22/2012 c30 f0r3v3rstr0n9
I love this story! I'm one of those people that just loves reading drama- i have issues! (;- So i really loves this! Its so realistic&Amazing!(:
I love this story! I'm one of those people that just loves reading drama- i have issues! (;- So i really loves this! Its so realistic&Amazing!(:
6/20/2012 c30 Maryam
Well god damn, you know i spent all night reading this. I was hooked from the first chapter. I love the plot, although there are many love/hate stories around it was undoubtedly original. Even though i spent all night reading this i really want more of Matt and Aaron. Well done to finishing such an amazing story. Honestly its such an achievement and THANK YOU for providing me with such great entertainment :)
Well god damn, you know i spent all night reading this. I was hooked from the first chapter. I love the plot, although there are many love/hate stories around it was undoubtedly original. Even though i spent all night reading this i really want more of Matt and Aaron. Well done to finishing such an amazing story. Honestly its such an achievement and THANK YOU for providing me with such great entertainment :)