
10/24/2007 c1
1Overrated Rage
I like this story. My friends and I were doing a roleplaying party and my name was Blare, except it was spelled "Blair". Sandy reminds me of myself. My friends are always trying to ge me to turn off my iPod. XD Keep up the good work.

I like this story. My friends and I were doing a roleplaying party and my name was Blare, except it was spelled "Blair". Sandy reminds me of myself. My friends are always trying to ge me to turn off my iPod. XD Keep up the good work.
10/24/2007 c1
14Fairyworld1217
Hahaha, really good so far. But minor tweakage.. There's no "s" infront of "Andy" after the name was called. Yes, I said it was minor, and probably dumb to point out, but I'm just looking out for you. Continue please?

Hahaha, really good so far. But minor tweakage.. There's no "s" infront of "Andy" after the name was called. Yes, I said it was minor, and probably dumb to point out, but I'm just looking out for you. Continue please?