
3/25/2012 c9 wilhelmiina2
Noon, you couldn't have left it there! Monstrous! Ah well, it was a good story had a fun Sunday evening reading, so thanks.
Noon, you couldn't have left it there! Monstrous! Ah well, it was a good story had a fun Sunday evening reading, so thanks.
4/28/2010 c9
2The Weatherwitch
omg omg OMG!
this story is AWESOME!
grr edward is such a git!
dont let her marry him!
please update soon? please?

omg omg OMG!
this story is AWESOME!
grr edward is such a git!
dont let her marry him!
please update soon? please?
7/19/2009 c9
1silken flame
ahem. HI! I've never reviewed before. I just wanna say, it's quite good! I think this story's better than your other one. But it's kinda crazy how they never seem to meet. I like the tensions, and how you built up the story, and the way they're attracted to each other. XD
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When're you gonna update again?

ahem. HI! I've never reviewed before. I just wanna say, it's quite good! I think this story's better than your other one. But it's kinda crazy how they never seem to meet. I like the tensions, and how you built up the story, and the way they're attracted to each other. XD
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When're you gonna update again?
6/3/2009 c9 smurf
i very much like this story, keep writing...
i very much like this story, keep writing...
3/5/2009 c9
5BlueAki
NO! I've been this story this whole day and now a cliffhanger? why must you torture me so? please contine this story. its wonderful and great.

NO! I've been this story this whole day and now a cliffhanger? why must you torture me so? please contine this story. its wonderful and great.
10/16/2008 c9 The Beaver
dude, you left us with this HUGE cliffhanger for three monthes? I'm addicted to this story! please try your best to update soon!
dude, you left us with this HUGE cliffhanger for three monthes? I'm addicted to this story! please try your best to update soon!
7/30/2008 c9
1writer209
ok so what is this nonsense? almost a month and no update! im physically pained by this cliffhanger

ok so what is this nonsense? almost a month and no update! im physically pained by this cliffhanger
7/5/2008 c9 Jacey
O my gosh I loved it! I can't wait for the next one. How could you leave it like that at the end. Ah! I'm going to go crazy! I will be checking every day for an update. You are an amazing writer. Keep em comin. :)
O my gosh I loved it! I can't wait for the next one. How could you leave it like that at the end. Ah! I'm going to go crazy! I will be checking every day for an update. You are an amazing writer. Keep em comin. :)
7/4/2008 c9 alayahop
I hope we'll see the next chapter really soon. You really shouldn't leave us like that - hanging on every word and desperately needing more. Not very nice of you
I hope we'll see the next chapter really soon. You really shouldn't leave us like that - hanging on every word and desperately needing more. Not very nice of you
7/3/2008 c9 Alenor
that was just mean! please update really soon so i can find out what happened! cya later ~ Alenor.
that was just mean! please update really soon so i can find out what happened! cya later ~ Alenor.
7/2/2008 c9
3junebird28
i am dying to know what happens! you have got to update soon! i am completely and totally addicted. for such a long time i wanted to read a story like this, but never found a really good one, but this is amazing! you must update soon!

i am dying to know what happens! you have got to update soon! i am completely and totally addicted. for such a long time i wanted to read a story like this, but never found a really good one, but this is amazing! you must update soon!