for Time6/10/2009 c1 
27Like a Lullaby Goodbye
Yes, very good! Nice subtle rhyming that you didn't sacrifice the quality of your poem for. It also includes great images that are unexpected but in a good way. The poem made me think about myself too which is a rare thing for a poem to do. All in all, great job!
27Like a Lullaby GoodbyeYes, very good! Nice subtle rhyming that you didn't sacrifice the quality of your poem for. It also includes great images that are unexpected but in a good way. The poem made me think about myself too which is a rare thing for a poem to do. All in all, great job!
11/19/2007 c1 44S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G
This is really, really, really good.
fantastic.
incredible.
awesometastical, even.
just... wow.
I still love it.
Ally
44S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.GThis is really, really, really good.
fantastic.
incredible.
awesometastical, even.
just... wow.
I still love it.
Ally