for Pale Visitor4/4/2001 c1 
2Hippie Heron
Good, maybe it needs more rhythm, but it's not stupid. Great idea, has a lot of feeling. Something that many can identify with. Keep writing!
2Hippie HeronGood, maybe it needs more rhythm, but it's not stupid. Great idea, has a lot of feeling. Something that many can identify with. Keep writing!
4/3/2001 c1 12MonkeyCrunk
That was great... you say to be nice... Girl this poem ROCKS! No joke either!
12MonkeyCrunkThat was great... you say to be nice... Girl this poem ROCKS! No joke either!
4/2/2001 c1 kitsune-chan
hee hee you finally posted this. good job again!
hee hee you finally posted this. good job again!