for A Whole New World1/8/2013 c21 Guest
You haven't updated in a long time. Please don't drop this, I want to continue reading it :(
You haven't updated in a long time. Please don't drop this, I want to continue reading it :(
12/8/2012 c21 chibi-Clar
What the hell! U just ended it! No!
I so love it by the way! Ur my favorite!
Update!
Unless u stared it as a different series in continuation of the ending of this chapter?
Wich I totally would love!
I looooooooooooove u! (Well the story)
What the hell! U just ended it! No!
I so love it by the way! Ur my favorite!
Update!
Unless u stared it as a different series in continuation of the ending of this chapter?
Wich I totally would love!
I looooooooooooove u! (Well the story)
7/15/2012 c21 Keke
OMG THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY! Sorry, but I really really really loved your story! I'm kind of hoping that you would continue writing! xD. I love how she was in love with two people at once and how hard it is for her to make a choice. I've read a lot of stories like this one but this is really great work.
Now for the not so great criticism, I think it may have been just a little to clique. I mean, like I said, there are lots of stories about how there are two guys and one of them are dying, and the other is also madly in love with this girl. Maybe if you would like put in some really awesome change of events, then it would become more interesting.
Anyhow, this is a great story and I hope you finish it. (Sorry but I'm being lazy and not wanting to sign in)
Lottza love,
Keke
OMG THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY! Sorry, but I really really really loved your story! I'm kind of hoping that you would continue writing! xD. I love how she was in love with two people at once and how hard it is for her to make a choice. I've read a lot of stories like this one but this is really great work.
Now for the not so great criticism, I think it may have been just a little to clique. I mean, like I said, there are lots of stories about how there are two guys and one of them are dying, and the other is also madly in love with this girl. Maybe if you would like put in some really awesome change of events, then it would become more interesting.
Anyhow, this is a great story and I hope you finish it. (Sorry but I'm being lazy and not wanting to sign in)
Lottza love,
Keke
2/25/2012 c21 Noorain
wow! At least this wasn't a cliche! :D
Good story! Loved the humour! :)
wow! At least this wasn't a cliche! :D
Good story! Loved the humour! :)
1/30/2011 c21 leavemeialone
This story has been so crazy. I hope you do finish it. I want to see her reunion with Knight. Gosh, their passion is so strong. I really did not expect Ford to have cancer, let alone die. This story is really really good. Usually, I am not a big fan of stories that have death or sadness, but you made it work so well. I really love Arinea's character. Everyone seems pretty cool. I am sad to see her separate from Knight, I really thought she wouldn't leave. I just wanted to say good job. :)
This story has been so crazy. I hope you do finish it. I want to see her reunion with Knight. Gosh, their passion is so strong. I really did not expect Ford to have cancer, let alone die. This story is really really good. Usually, I am not a big fan of stories that have death or sadness, but you made it work so well. I really love Arinea's character. Everyone seems pretty cool. I am sad to see her separate from Knight, I really thought she wouldn't leave. I just wanted to say good job. :)
8/25/2010 c21 CaitlinEA
How do you pronounce 'Arinea'?
Oh, my gosh, I can't believe Ford died.
It as so sad, I almost cried.
And I can't believe she left Knight for five years.
Will he still be waiting, or has he got someone new?
What about Knight's mother? What's up with her?
Can't wait for next chapter, update soon!
How do you pronounce 'Arinea'?
Oh, my gosh, I can't believe Ford died.
It as so sad, I almost cried.
And I can't believe she left Knight for five years.
Will he still be waiting, or has he got someone new?
What about Knight's mother? What's up with her?
Can't wait for next chapter, update soon!
1/10/2010 c21 HelloKitty
Just read the whole story in 1 sitting; I loved it, but there are many glaring grammatical errors that really bugged me. Also, the story moved a little too fast, and the amount of time that passed between chapters and between scenes in chapters was often hard to distinguish. On the whole, though, AWNW was a fun, easy read that was quite enjoyable. Oh, and if you are going to start part two of AWNW, please do so soon; otherwise, I will probably forget about it and never get to read the sequel! :)
Just read the whole story in 1 sitting; I loved it, but there are many glaring grammatical errors that really bugged me. Also, the story moved a little too fast, and the amount of time that passed between chapters and between scenes in chapters was often hard to distinguish. On the whole, though, AWNW was a fun, easy read that was quite enjoyable. Oh, and if you are going to start part two of AWNW, please do so soon; otherwise, I will probably forget about it and never get to read the sequel! :)
12/28/2009 c21 
1xjumpthenfall
damnn.. you got me cryingg overr a storyy..lol
i could not stop crying when i read chapter 18
againn.. pretty pretty pretty pleasee with hundreds and thousands on topp..updatee soon.. (:
1xjumpthenfalldamnn.. you got me cryingg overr a storyy..lol
i could not stop crying when i read chapter 18
againn.. pretty pretty pretty pleasee with hundreds and thousands on topp..updatee soon.. (:
12/16/2009 c21 2alamodie
dang this story, is good, not to mention mega intense! totally awesome! please please pretty please update soon!
2alamodiedang this story, is good, not to mention mega intense! totally awesome! please please pretty please update soon!
8/27/2009 c21 readernotwriter1
YOU PLAGIARIZED THIS CHAPTER FROM SOPHIE KINSELLA'S SHOPPAHOLIC TAKES MANHATTAN! STEALER! STEALER! I HATE PLAGIARIZERS LIKE YOU! IT DOESNT MATTER IF YOU ONLY STOLE PARTS! YOU DIDN'T PUT YOUR SOURCE, OR THAT IT WAS BASED ON THE BOOK! PLAGIARIZER! STEALER!
YOU PLAGIARIZED THIS CHAPTER FROM SOPHIE KINSELLA'S SHOPPAHOLIC TAKES MANHATTAN! STEALER! STEALER! I HATE PLAGIARIZERS LIKE YOU! IT DOESNT MATTER IF YOU ONLY STOLE PARTS! YOU DIDN'T PUT YOUR SOURCE, OR THAT IT WAS BASED ON THE BOOK! PLAGIARIZER! STEALER!
8/7/2009 c21 4LaMeO1
wow. your story is pretty great
really awesome
update when you get the chance...hopefully soon
=D
4LaMeO1wow. your story is pretty great
really awesome
update when you get the chance...hopefully soon
=D
8/6/2009 c21 3Potentia Itinen
I read the whole story through again, and you had me in tears, once again.
3Potentia ItinenI read the whole story through again, and you had me in tears, once again.
7/24/2009 c2 1green.jellybeans.rock.my.socks
hi this is x-x-x-angel
LMAO
this is definitely my favourite chapter. The lamp post thing is jokes
yeah...so...good story
1green.jellybeans.rock.my.sockshi this is x-x-x-angel
LMAO
this is definitely my favourite chapter. The lamp post thing is jokes
yeah...so...good story