for In Courage4/27/2008 c1 
1barelyamiable
This was a very strongly written haiku.
I especially liked the repetition of the last line.
It gives a very vivid picture of strength and courage.
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1barelyamiableThis was a very strongly written haiku.
I especially liked the repetition of the last line.
It gives a very vivid picture of strength and courage.
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11/1/2007 c1 169MallowsWins
This is superbly written. The last line really hits the spot. Amazing haiku.
Peace, Daze
169MallowsWinsThis is superbly written. The last line really hits the spot. Amazing haiku.
Peace, Daze
10/29/2007 c1 sylvia's syndrome
This is an excellent haiku. It's a really striking piece- the effect last line is really powerful. But really, the entire piece is strong. Keep up the good work!
This is an excellent haiku. It's a really striking piece- the effect last line is really powerful. But really, the entire piece is strong. Keep up the good work!