Reviews: Does This Make You Uncomfortable?

for Does This Make You Uncomfortable?

5/31/2009 c1

2Acaylee
That was so adorable! :D After I read a few sentences, I couldn't stop smiling!

5/21/2009 c1

9thesewords
This, was SO sweet.

I have to add you to my favorite authors.

So cute.

Keep writing.

5/19/2009 c1 forkandyoghurt
Aw that's cute :'D Not the everyday kind of romance oneshot~

5/18/2009 c1

2takeabreath
aww, i thought it was really cute :)

i loved the whole plot/concept of it!

5/14/2009 c1 ZeAs9377153
I wish it had been a story not just a exerpt

5/9/2009 c1

22effervescent-sentiments
Oh, wow! That was completely adorable!

I really like that you didn't give them names; names can sometimes give identities, and this way we were able, in a short amount of time, to give them their own personalities without you having to work at it. :) Good choice.

You're a very good writer - I'll have to read more of your stuff coming up soon. ;)

Jules

4/29/2009 c1

2Tamashii Hime
Great little ficcy!

4/25/2009 c1 Rayne
aww...i loved it! that was so cute!

4/19/2009 c1 HoFSoW
Now *that* is good writing.

4/10/2009 c1 lets imagine that
That was the cutest thing I have ever read. :)

4/5/2009 c1 kawenchan
Twas incredibly sweet in a very clever way. Nice job. I was smiling the whole time. :)

3/23/2009 c1

1elukazina
sweetest thing

3/16/2009 c1

12AEJ325
M, that was great. I mean a little vauge or whatever at the start b/c I had no clue who they were etc. But I figure that was just one of the lures in the story.

Right, well. I totally loved it.

And it's so going on my favs...

3/10/2009 c1

1love and misadventures
Lol, my friend was saying the other day that she played this game with her boyfriend :D

3/3/2009 c1 silver shaft
so cute! loved it. so simple and sweet.

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